This is such a good story!

Please go on writing!

I've been waiting for far too long!

Please update!

YAY!
love it!
can't wait for the next one =)

this a very interesting story and i love the plot, cant wait for more. will akane ever find pchan is ryouga and will ranma ever admit he likes akane and vice versa. update soon.

Arg, you are so cruel for us poor reader ! it's not fair, you make them kiss and destroy everything after TT_TT Ranma is stupid, but is it that much to deny a kiss?
Keep writting, love this story, but please try to mess less with their emotional feeling, it's look like they advance one step and move back three steps TT_TT They said so many times "i hate you" and "our engament are over" that it's becoming crazy...
Please, I hope next chapter will be the good one for the two !

Why does Nanma talk like a **?

I guess you did all 25 chapters really well.

Hi Chette, i'm glad you finally update i read again and again this fanfic since 2006, you have made a really cute and sweet story and i wanted to ask you why didn't you change the kiss between Shampoo and Ranma? yes you said you're writing what happened in anime, but still why? i'm crying T.T ok this is your fanfic and you write what you think is the best, by the way english is not my first language too.

Keep writing
*Kohana*

Okay, in the beginning, I thought that your story was very original, but, then, as I read into furthur chapters, I noticed that most of the quotes are direct excerpts from the manga/anime, and that disappointed me.

I highly suggest that you get a beta-reader for this; it's in need of major editing.

For one thing, I've also noticed that in the beginning of almost every chapter, you say "...English is Chette's first language, She wrote this when she was a child." I understand that children aren't the smartest when it comes to grammar, but you're getting a lot of the words mixed up; such as using plurals. When you use them, they kind of seem that they're used when they aren't needed and NOT used when they ARE needed. This is something that you can really work on for future chapters.

Now, the one thing that REALLY pops out in your fic is your use of punctuation, which is, also, incorrect. You tend to use comma's where periods should be, making the sentence a run-on and diffucult to understand. There's, actually, a lot more I could say about your punctuation, but I'll leave that to a beta (if you get one).

Also, take this hint; When Ranma is in his girl form, try not to say "Ranma (Ranko)" whenever you mention him. The readers will know that Ranma is in his girl form because you're using his girl nama (Ranko), instead of his guy name (Ranma).

As I said, above, get a beta-reader. Your story will turn out much better if you do.

~Hannahkimi

does this mean Shampoo will b after Nanma? or Ranma? (plz let it b Nanma! all the better if she goes after him! the baka, tell Ranma he can do whateva 2 him!) i like it alot! update soon! ^_^

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

hey, u wrote this when u were little?! that's amazing!!

This fanfic looks interesting.

Ahh, Ranma why did you have to say that? Man, I hope Akane will forgive him and Ranma would stop being a jerk. Stupid Nanma too...hahah. BUt anyways, I am so glad you updated Chette-chan! It was fantastic, and enter Shampoo! Keep up the great work and update when you can!

~Kohana

first of all, ranma wouldnt kno what the word committment meant, and second, he would never say "committment isn't for me" or "I mean I will commit myself with the Arts but never to a woman"

he'd only say that to get out of trouble. which he wasnt.

and if a woman heard that, ranma would not have a chance in the world.

hope u have a plan to fix this new rift.

trie some one else for ranma then akane. It sicken's me to see writer keep putting these two to gether in story's when your tring some thing new.