 Sharnii Brooke 2009-09-07 . chapter 1I loved it :)
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 Scherherazade 2009-08-16 . chapter 1Interesting story. |
 nekazowa 2009-01-22 . chapter 1a one shot?! WHY?!
its too GOOD to be a ONE SHOT!
*sniff* i-if you dont make a sequal i m-might cry...
lol, please? or another chapter at least?
*puppy face* |
 w0ah 2008-12-03 . chapter 1how cute!
it was in a way a little OOC but the kind that you enjoy reading.
great job portraying the characters. the amount of description and everything made it perfect :D |
 my name is paper YAH 2008-07-11 . chapter 1why did she slap at her reflection?? are inu and her together in this fic? |
 Rene-Quest 2007-02-12 . chapter 1This was pretty good; rather cute. I liked it. ^_^ |
 lifeisadream 2006-01-08 . chapter 1wow...that was nice. i really liked it. i'm going to add it my favourites right now. thanks for putting it up. |
 the name's Evil. Pure Evil. 2005-11-22 . chapter 1 Yes, a little OOC (Der. S/K always is) but sweet all the same. |
 heymary 2005-11-03 . chapter 1ARGHH! this ALSO needs a sequel! you're such a tease! good story though. ^^ |
 LadySorrow1121 2005-10-22 . chapter 1Okay...This was okay, I like how they met and such, but there are so many questions! Why would she slap the water! Does she not like how he fled so suddenly, like he finds her disgusting? And is there going to be an epilouge? I won't mention anymore questions, but please add a chapter to ansewer my questions or something!
Ja,
Amber's Arrow |
 Hiei's Ice Maiden 2005-04-09 . chapter 1This is really good, and if you ever attemp to, I really would like it if you made a sequel~ |
 AnimeGirl622 2005-01-26 . chapter 1i like ^^ |
 kunthea 2005-01-06 . chapter 1 very good story. the interactions between the two are interesting. it's simpley well written and it's short which is good (just too tire to read long story). love your story. good luck with your other works. |
 T-T WHYA1SHOT? 2004-11-24 . chapter 1 THis is so awesome I wish it wasn't a one shot! |
 MythraPenDragon 2004-09-26 . chapter 1 A ONESHOT! You have got to be kidding. IT ROCKED! Please, find some way to continue. A sequel if needed. But it is cool. |