it is a bit OOC but its better than most that iv read. i really do like this 1shot though. it is well written.

I loved it :)

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Interesting story.

a one shot? WHY?

its too GOOD to be a ONE SHOT!

*sniff* i-if you dont make a sequal i m-might cry...

lol, please? or another chapter at least?

*puppy face*

how cute!

it was in a way a little OOC but the kind that you enjoy reading.

great job portraying the characters. the amount of description and everything made it perfect :D

why did she slap at her reflection? are inu and her together in this fic?

This was pretty good; rather cute. I liked it. _

wow...that was nice. i really liked it. i'm going to add it my favourites right now. thanks for putting it up.

Yes, a little OOC (Der. S/K always is) but sweet all the same.

ARGHH! this ALSO needs a sequel! you're such a tease! good story though.

Okay...This was okay, I like how they met and such, but there are so many questions! Why would she slap the water! Does she not like how he fled so suddenly, like he finds her disgusting? And is there going to be an epilouge? I won't mention anymore questions, but please add a chapter to ansewer my questions or something!

Ja,

Amber's Arrow

This is really good, and if you ever attemp to, I really would like it if you made a sequel

i like

very good story. the interactions between the two are interesting. it's simpley well written and it's short which is good (just too tire to read long story). love your story. good luck with your other works.

THis is so awesome I wish it wasn't a one shot!