Things written in second person are rare... And always fascinate me when I find them, because they are hard to find done well. This one is.

Got to wonder what people thought when it was realized the two were kissing... I wonder what they think of eachother...

Well written! Great read!

I enjoyed this alot! Flowed very well, though the sort-of-third-person pov took a bit to get used to at first. Good job though! This... really demands a sequel. ;_;

Steamy MomoKai! I likes, I likes! ^-^

i love love love this pairing... that was done really well btw... :D

*squeels* KYAH I LOVEZ IT!1 this is the first momoxkai fic ive ever read!
u noe wat? there should be more momoxkai fans in the world. ^_^ well...i loved ur fic! rite if u rite more ill read them all! and review them!

this is very well written!! please write more!

... WOW! So intense and ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL MOMO X KAIDOH FIC! YAY! Write more of it and I love how you describe it with such words. Compared to mine, I suck. Ha ha ha! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

I like. Quite a lot. It's very them.

its very intense =) hahaha.. i like how you depicted the character feelings... keep it up! =)