grate i love it so far

this fic is absolutely excelent now if you wouldnt mind id suggest you start updating soon or i l get a certain brolly to pay you a visit and i l have goku ocupied with food i believe i am clear:)this idea about race changing is good , if you are foull out of ideas try this make some chapters regarding the preparations for videls transformation and some chapters after that regarding the training on the zone then you can either cat there or have a briliant idea(most likely) and come up with something amazing once again.

ch1- what a great father-son reunion

ch2- a tournament...there noway gohan will lose, he probably as strong as his father

Oh my god! This has to be the best story I ever read and please updated when you feel like it. Maybe you should the villains in this story so it can be very cool and have Gohan get revenge on 17
and 18's creator.

Great story, I must say. It would be great if you would update it, but I'm not going to predssure you if you have a reason for it.

This is a excellent story.

this is an extramly good fic and i can't see any loop holes but then again i'm not vary good at such stuff.

I haven't seen any plot holes and so far it's going good and i loved the saiyan history.

I think your doing great and can't wait for the next capter.

GAH! UPDATE ALREADY! IT'S BEEN EXACTLY ONE YEAR AND TEN DAYS SINCE YOU'VE UPDATED FOR PETE'S SAKE!

Very good. I hope you start working on this again, because It is very enjoyable

Wow! What an amazing way to get Videl to go on the training trip. I especially liked your subtle hint to Oh my Goddess! there as well. I am really enjoying this fic and eagerly await updates for it ^_^

dude great story I cant wait until you update next.

looking forward to the race changer thing man,

Darth Drew

That was a really well written story. Hope u will still continue or at least end it somewhere in the near future. LOVE YOUR STORY!

Absolutely Love this Story!
Great Job with it!
Please Update again soon!

- Lucy