O_O. Wow now that was... weird. Don't get me wrong it was a very good story. It is just that I have read sories that were sad and a bit confusing but this one might be the cheery of sadness compared to the ones I've read. A sugestion from one Timber to another. Mayby you can write a story similar to this but in some place were magic and deamons are alive. That might make things a little more interesting for your readers. Anyway I gotta go. Bye.

PS: 'Cheery' means 'large amount' or 'king'

Okay let me see, In the first chapter Tyson and Kai broke up and Max felt he wasn't good enoughe for Rei becuase since he has feelings for Tyson he felt that he was unfiathful. And In the seconde chapter I belive that Rei wanted revenge from Kai since I belive he killed Mao. And that's how Kai became a killer. Next chapter is where Rei finds Kai and Kai's sick enoughe to kiss Rei to make him taste his blood and steal the gun from Rei. Rei is there not to kill him yet. He tells Kai that in a fit of anger or insanity, Hillary killed Tyuson for not returning her feeling for him. Kai, was so shocked and depressed by the fact his only love, died and they never worked things out yet. Took the gun he stole from Rei and shot himself to join him. Was that correct or was that more confusing.

Alex: I understand it.

Me: Thank you, what time is it?

Alex: 6:07, why do you ask?

Me: I'm late for my date! *Runs out of the room*

Alex: The story was hard to get through but a few more read-peats and you'll understand. It was good though, gotta go! I have to cover up for E.A since Robert's gonna check up on her tonight! Ja Ne!

Im speechless...

MAx: She loved it so much..or something like that...

Me: MAXIE! *jumps max*

MAx: why are you jumping me? jump on kai!

KAi: HEY!

Me: KAi! *jumps kai*

Kai:...I hate you max..

MAx: FREE! XD!

ME: -_-;; okay anyway loved the story and i understand all of it..Very good. Cant wait for more stories from you!

i loved this story you should keep writting more beyblade storys because you are the best.

Great story,i have read your story 6 times and i forgot to review hehe sorry -_-U

But i don't get the Hilary thing

Did Hilary kill Takao

That was REALLY good! I loved that! It was so sad, but I still liked it. I love the ending. This is going in the favorites!

That was really good! _
I liked the way how it all blended together!
*grabs tissue*
Me likes so much! _

Wow. Tyson and Kai both... died. I admit, this was really strange to me, but it also attracted me to it. The way it was written matched all that was going on. I liked how they're all attached! Kai likes Tyson, Max likes Tyson, Tyson likes Kai but won't go back to him, Kai killed Mariah, Rei wants to (and does!) kill Kai... very nicely done.

that was really cute and sad.
good luck with your other stories.
love dragi

I understood it. You don't need to change it. I liked it. It was like an old movie/book. Very 20's. Very original. And that's what counts!

AW SO SWET! I LUV IT! KAWAI! THIS FIC ROX! SWEET KAI ASKED REI T KILL HIM TA JOIN TY OMG IM CRYING AGAIN! SWET! ANOTHER REASON TO HATE HILL, THE HILLNESS.*growls...

DONT YOU DARE CHANGE THAT!
That was lovely _
I loved it *so* much
PLEASE dont change it! You are vrilliant!
Kai-Suk up
SHUT UP! IM TRYING TO BE NICE HER!
kai-Makes a change!
excuse me timmy, I have to kill Kai now...GREAT FIC THOUGH!
*runs to kill Kai*
Kai-Uh...Im over *here* Arashi!
I knew that _;; I really liked this Timmy and im glad you gave us this wonderful fic *glomps Timmy*

Interesting, I like it angsty, very nice. I hope you soon get to the KaixRei scene hehe, cute pairing. Update soon.

*stunned silence*
Kai-O.o...
Takao-O.o...
Rei-O.o...
Max-O.o...
(and just so as not to break the cycle...)
O.o...
Takao-Wow...thats *Insert long word that he *must* have gotten from the dictionary*
Been reading the dictionary again, ne Taka-chan?
Takao-Hey! *silence* Yes...
; *laughs* Thought so
Kai- Leave him alone...unless you want me to sprain your *other* hand for you
Vindictive *censored* I hate you .
Kai-No you don't _ You think I'm sexy *strikes a pose*
Full of yourself much?
Kai-*grins*
Takao-Have you noticed the lack of typo's in this review?
Max-Thats coz she can only write one-handed *grins* so she writes slower and the words actually make *sense*
I hate you all...
Rei-Why me?
You're...I don't know, but I'll think of something later.
Again, great chapter Timmy. I don't know how you do it. Your fics get better and better and you've once again got me hooked. My Boys are once again wonderful characters with backgrounds and I cant wait to see the fic develop.
Kai-why i she callign us *her* boys again?
Kai- *shudders* its creepy...
Once again., I hate you all.
Thanks for this wonderful work timmy an d*please* continue
Arashi (to answer your question, Arashi Doragon means Storm Dragon in Japanese )
Kai, and the Bladebreakers.

update soon!(: