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| Vilya0 2008-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseAha prepare for a review! Make it triple while you do! That was adorable! The talk of Togepi be of much cuteness. I particularly liked the de-Scyther XD! The plot was simple but I just love reading about their ordinary life on the road, and it was such a cute moment. Togepi calling Ash "Daddy" never ceases to make me squee. It brought me much contentments. I'm signing off again...! *bing* |
| Tyler T. the Pikafan 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThat...Was...SO CUTE! I loved it! Togepi is so innocent and adorable and it makes you just want to snuggle her. Personally, I don't think her grammar would be THAT bad but it was still a really cute fic! I would absolutely LOVE it if you did another TPOV story (togepi point of view)! It even teaches a great lesson! The only things I would change would be a couple words here and there that certain characters wouldn't have said and I would have made it longer (cause it was so cute!) but otherwise it was great! I really hope you make another one like this! Pika! Tyler T. the Pikafan |
| Wildcat 2008-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was a nice story. Kind of hard to read it though. |
| Maskmon 2008-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really cute, and i had to laugh at the way you made Togepi talk. Mostly considering thats how i talk for fun sometimes. Good fic, good idea. |
| HiME-Kaori NaNoDa. 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseaw! i found that very cute! I love Togepi. ^_^ The misspellings were very cute indeed. =Kaori, Ka-Chan. |
| Spottedfire 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI loved Togepi! It was cute! :D Didn't know Togepi thought of Team Rocket that way, heh heh! |
| nondescript 2007-10-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseHeh, pretty cute, i have a phrase that fits this situation perfectly, "from the mouths of babes" seems to work eh? This was cute, almost sickeningly cute, but not there yet. The vocabulary was...*snickers*...interesting. I'd love to see everyones faces when they hear what togepi calls Meowt, Jessie and James, SWEATDROP OF DOOM!! Heh de-scythered just...yeah. So good job, i needed this sugary fluff (redundant i think...) |
| hazlov2004 2007-09-20 ch 1, | abuseAw that is so cute togepis cute |
| stormseaker 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, you must have worked a fair bit on this to get all the wording, not right? Any way its a realy cute story and you did a realy good job even if it took a while to get used to. |
| shiny eevee 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseCAN YOU EVEN MAKE A coharent sentence |
| crystal.elements 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. That must've taken AGES to write out in Togepi-nese. lol. That said, I still enjoyed it, even if it took me a bit longer to comprehend. It's a sweet outlook on the group (does that sentence make sense?), and it's definitely unique. Great job on creativity for this one. ;) I read your other story, Cave of a Million Colors, just yesterday, I must remember to review that story too... |
| FireDitto 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseBlah. That was SO irritating to read -laughs- Togepi needs to learn better grammar, me thinks -grins- But I really like how you did it in her point of view, and her thoughts. It was very interesting indeed xD I enjoyed it, once I got used to Togepi's strange grammar run. She is an odd one -grins- Great work, and I bet Microsoft Word simply adored it xDD FireDitto |
| EVAN AAML 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abusere-writing this review for favorite spot. sincerely, evan, a fan of aaml |
| Pink Chibi Mermaid 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good story keep it up! |
| sonic 1 2006-01-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseit was great really great |