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| an-angel-in-hell 2006-02-19 ch 1,  | abuseAww. Poor Mercutio. I love him so. You just want to snuggle him, no? |
| S 2004-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abuse*perks up* a sequel? uh please get it up soon! i like the way you've done the language. |
| DigitalAngel4U 2004-04-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was very good. I just got done reading Romeo and Juliet in my English class and with Shakespeare still etched into my mind I can tell you that you did the language very well. I hope that the lover person is Benvolio! He's my fave and with him and Mercutio being so different they would be cute! Don't stop here, please keep going! DigitalAngel4U |
| insert emo penname here 2004-04-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was terrific. |
| Pedagogue 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThe style/language is fantastic although I'm not really one to judge that. I'm going to assume the loved one is Benvolio. One thing: isn't it a bit early for steel? |
| The Sugarfaerie 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abuseActually, I think the iambic pentameter worked pretty well. You handled the Shakespearian language really well too (I don't do Shakespearean. My mind doesn't extend that far). Great fic, keep writing! |