Any chance of this being continued?

Its finally getting interesting, I'm kinda hoping you have Ryu show his true self in the next chapter.

AHH! This chapter just puts me to shame. I don't ever think I could write something as well as yours. It's hardly a surprise that people would give you stuff for you to write something. How about becoming a writer someday? :P

Seriously, the plot development is coming nicely along. I feel as though there is more suspense and action waiting to burst out of the seams in the next chapter. Thank you for presenting another lovely chapter to readers like me and thanks for the inspiration as well. I look forward to the next chapter.

AWESOME DUDE_ GREATR! keep upo the exceallant work- luved it-Keep adding action adn excitment.!

One interesting thing is looking at the 'good' side of the St-Evans Templars, though they most likely still have hidden motives. But as to really why they consider Ryu 'evil', that remains to be seen.

Unless I've missed out on it...

Great work so far, although this chapter seemed to be a bit rushed. Hope you get over your writer's block soon and give another good chapter! You just gave me ideas for AU fanfiction I might wanna write :) thanks!

Seemed it was coming up to Ryu having to leave. But for Nina...hmm...she'll have to hurry..

The story keeps getting more interesting. Ishan seems like he's evil. Shade's presence reinforces that impression, making me think that he's in league with the demons, or is one himself. I'm guessing that Maia is going to fight Ryu and lose, only to be spared and turn against Ishan later. Of course this is just speculation, so I'm probably wrong. As for the moon turning red, I'm assuming that it didn't go unnoticed by the general populace. I wonder how everybody will react? I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

excellent work as always. The different references added in to spice up the story were appropriate and wonderful. Sometimes it scares me how you came to gather so much knowledge just to write this story. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter and take your time ;)

Seems like Nina missed quite a chance to express her feelings. Hmm...once again there's a sense of forbidding...what is it exactly that's coming...

good story.. its amazing how well you manage to portrait each characters attitude and style.. well done..

Interesting but it would be nice to no where this ryu came from.

Update the story it is interesting.

Well, it explained some of the questions I had raised in the last review about the last chapter. The "Lord of the Ring's" reference confused me as to why you included it, I felt that since this was a world presumably separate from our own there would be no "Lord of the Rings". Also, the word was inhuman, not inhumane. Looking forward to the next chapter.

SO, so disturbing xD

*shudders.*

Thats all i can say except.. "precious" lol.