   LiLaZnAnGeL4EvA 2004-11-13 . chapter 4update!! stupid cliffhangers... i love ur story! |
| D a r k n e s s in H e a r t 2004-09-28 . chapter 4 flame?! NO WAY! this was a perfectly awesome ending! It's a little cliffy, yeah, but I still like it! it rocks! great job, this was seriously a great story!
~ D a r k n e s s in H e a r t ~ |
| UNIVERSE-KRISSY 2004-05-08 . chapter 4 Good Job! Keep up the good wrighting Love much Krissy |
| cyjj 2004-05-03 . chapter 4 The end? So abrupt? It is a nice story...but can be better if you elaborate :) |
| Seida-310 2004-05-03 . chapter 4 AH that was so great!
i loved it! Great fic! bye! |
| TaRe-ChiBi 2004-04-20 . chapter 3 CLIFFIE!
Lots of OOC...i like update soon! |
| Seida-310 2004-04-20 . chapter 3 That was really great, I like your fic so much!! umm what to say what to say, umm you can always make them ignore each other, but that would be to cliché and common so just writhe anything you feel, k?.. well see you, bye!! update soon!! |
| alex 2004-04-20 . chapter 3 please update soon |
| cyjj 2004-04-20 . chapter 3 Aw...these young couple...such a waste such thing happen. Please update soon. |
| D a r k n e s s in H e a r t 2004-04-20 . chapter 3 AH! this is the most wonderful fic ever! keep it up! I have an idea for the next chapter, if you'll accept it! how about those 2 girls that told tomoyo that stuff come up to Eriol and sort of gossip/talk bad/tell Eriol wut they told tomoyo sort of...then Eriol gets mad and yu know, patches things up ...I mean, you did say this was a roller coaster rite? ^_~
~ D a r k n e s s in H e a r t ~ |
 K a w a i i - S y a o r a n 2004-04-16 . chapter 2kawaii chapter! didnt see when you updated sorry. |
| cyjj 2004-04-14 . chapter 2 Aww...young love...such a bliss... |
 Yunali 2004-04-12 . chapter 2Aww..its very sweet! Kawaii!! *starry eyes* I like the story please do continue. GO E&T!! *cheers* ^_^ |
| ...moi... 2004-04-12 . chapter 2 oh, so cute ^__^ please do update soon .. hmm.. wonder what the next chapter would be like ^__^ peace!
oh yah, gomen if i have no encouraging words to tell you or long fancy poetic phrases that may sound so good yet i myself may not know the meaning... i'm a very forward person, so peace! (^_^)V |
| Seida-310 2004-04-12 . chapter 2 I’m really loving your story so far… You’ve portrayed Eriol as this knight that has been set to rescue his maiden (which I absolutely love!). well I’ve got just one observation, that I don’t really know if you should take for granted (cause is not really important): anemia is a very common disease, and a person that suffers from it wouldn’t really need a 24-7 nurse, so you can always make it a little more dramatic saying that is a rare type of anemia like Hemlytic Anemia or Cooley's anemia, which both show the same type of symptoms that Tomoyo’s suffering (ok now I’m sounding like a doctor, is just that my sister suffers a lot from anemia, and is not really the big deal)…but anyways we can always stick to our imagination so just forget about it…. Really love your fic.. keep up, and update soon.. I mean really soon… |
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