This is so very good!

I first read this about a month ago. At the time, I didn't really pay much attention to it, but then several weeks later, I felt the need to read it again. Of course, I couldn't find it. So I searched high and low, putting in some of the most general words I could in the search engine in hopes of finding it. I scrolled through about twenty different favorites lists.

And then I found it. And it was good. Better than I remembered.

And all was good with the world.

This story...was BEAUTIFUL!

You have simply BLOWN ME AWAY!

Good job on this!! Splendid! Just SPLENDID!! ^^

I love the story concerning Riku and Sora, but PLEASE!! SEPHIROTH AND CLOUD ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO BE TOGETHER!! LEON AND CLOUD! they are the most wonderful couple ever.. can YOU PLEASE WRITE A FIC ABOUT THEM TWO??!! I LOVE them! And so should you miss-all-smutty-writer:P No, I mean it, you are extremely godd, as in PERFECT!

This story was beautiful... ^_^

This story was beautiful and written EXTREMLY well! ( I hope I spelled that right..) I love enerything about this fanfiction! It had my two most favorite pairings in the world! RikuXSora and SephirothXCloud!I hope you can make a sequel! I would defiantly read it, and I'm sure others would be happy too, if you made one! Anyway, keep up the fantastic work! YOUR WRITING SKILLS PAWN ALL!

Oh, I love this fic. I've had a great time reading it. Wonderful job. :)

Wow. This fic is so awesome. I mean, I already played KH2 (but didn't finish, damn disc got scratched... T_T), but I like this better. =D

This is very good considering that you didn't have KHCOM or KH2 to work with. It's very pretty, PRETTY!

I like how you had a heartless produced from the destruction, for lack of a better word, of the Ansem/Riku hybrid...thing. Very creative. Hell, I liked all your concepts here, from the Koritsu world drawing power from Rikus heart, the paradox within Mizu, going to Hallow Bastion, EVERYTHING!

Of course, I love the pairings too. Mwee!

I applauds you and fav the story!

hello its me again
-yoai fan girl yell-
xD i loved it loved it loved it loved it xD
m..
as for mizu!
its xernort or whatever that guys real name is...
IT HAS TO BE! -eyes burning with fire-
AHH!
yeah um okay.
good bye

ah. im at chapter 3 xD
im just sad that im going to have to read the rest tomorrow.
i cant wait to read the rest xD
uh. ill review again after i finish the story... just cuz i like it that much xD

I just put this story on my alert list. Jumping Kittens on the Fourth of July? It's complete! D: Gahh. Stupid I must be.

Aww so cute. I love your stories so much! ^^ Such a great writer, you are! :D :D *applauds*

Oh..my..GOD! I just finished reading it on (you know..for the non-tame versions) that was so beautiful! I loved it! You made one fangirl very very happy! The sex scenes were gorgeous, the storyline was awesome, and the fight scenes were very nicely written. Keep up the amazing job

thanksGod it's a happy ending T^T *cries with happiness*
oh wow, I really really like your fanfic >w<
*thumbs up for you*

omg.. omg.. I mean, OMG!
Riku.. just when he had a chance to get Sora free.. T^T
...you make me deppressed here.. = =;;