That's an awsome fic! Keep up the good work!

Tis a good ficcie so far, Nessi-Chan. I shall read the rest later. A lazy bum I am..x.x *Nods* Luv you forever! ^_^

Awesome story it's orginal and so good ^^

Okay...anyway, I finally read it...wow...took me long enough...anyway
Okay..I'm kinda busy...but I must say that...well...the battle...you need some names.
On Ty Kamara...Go to any random thread...Find Uki...Click on his name...Gets to his profile...Click on homepage/website...you get what I mean...shoudl take you to Beyblade Spirit. They have the names of teh attacks.

One more thing...try checking your grammar...and the conversation at the begining was a bit repetitive.
Otherwise you're doing fine.
Gotta go

Aiaiaiaia… vens tarde mas vens! Lol I have to say: good going! Loved the talk between Jonnhy and Salamurion (acho k e assim k se escreve Nessi) considering I totaly dispise Jonny for wat he did to mi bishi Kai! The battles are not that bad ya know? They do miss something though... I can’t tell what exacly, maybe they just need to be a little longer so they are a bit more exciting, otherwise all is over to early. Also, instead of using names or repetings tings: sent a fire tornado, then he blew another tornado, and the tornado..., instead of doing stuffs this, you could use other ways like: he send the fire tornado ate them, the fiery wind making a living inferno above heart itself ;P. Just a suggestion of course. I also like the manipulated (you as Draco) Tryhorn and Trygio hurt each other very kawaii ^^! Tada till next time! Better be soon...
ps: which is the main battle after all?!

Interesting so far. Nice to see a few more bitbeast stories. Update soon.

Yay, another update! (Almost thought you forgot about this fic... =( )

...T-T they lost?! Well, I guess everyone has setbacks... T-T

never mind!

you have a good idea! don't worry, i won't flame you! i just want to say i like it! are you going to use any of the BladeBrackers?

Hey! Thanks for reviewing my story! I'm sorry if my 'rules' sound a bit like yours, it's how I invisioned them from the start of the fic. Soz! Anyway, I love this story! Looking forward to reading more!
P.S: My e-mail's stuffing up for some reason, so I wont be able to e-mail you. Sorry!

Okay. It's good. Seriously, I like it. Of course, you could always update sooner...
Kerobe: *** voice* And who's talking?
UniGirl: *blushes* Anyway, it's good to check your work for typos, they count. A lot of people can't read unproofread work. Wait. Not can't wont.
You also didn't have to kinda point out what I'm doing...
About the OOCness, It's getting there. There was one Tyson line that was OOC, but otherwise, it's great. I love your portrayal of Black Dranzer...
^^
Why I keep on changing my chapters? They need revision. And also, I've gotten into liking longer chapters over short ones.
Update Soon!
Bye

Oh yay! Update! =D
Isn't that nice, they're all working together...:P
Update soon! It's getting good! =D

you are crasy!!
yaks!4014 viruses? jesus..hope you didn'0t send me any infected mail...
humm. a battle... bey batles are hard do do, you cknow that right? you have to do lots of thinking don0t rush thinks if you're not ready or it will come out wrong. I would advise reading some good fics with figts: BBA High is pretty good if you want take a look ^^
babai

Ha, I like this fic! Really, very nice. Keep writing! Dragoon's going to make an appearance in my fic soon (as soon as I update... *ducks flying rotten fruit*), but Dragoon's a girl in my fic. Oh, did I just give that away? ARGH! HELP! But honestly, I like this fic a lot. Thanks for reviewing mine!
May the grace of the Manga protect you in your path under the sky (don't mind me, its a saying from Lord of the Rings that I altered to suit my wacked sense of humour).

I did email you. I think you should check your "safe list" to make sure I'm on there. I heard about my friend having one once. Cause I get ur emails,I reply, and you don't get them
Okay. Good. I was going to rant about names. But you already got one. YAY
OOCness: Tala is, for one, very Ooc. Sorry if that stung. I like to be honest rather than modest. Oocness is so easy to write, so hard to fix, etc. Here are some suggestions: 1: Rewatch all the tala episodes. Or look up quotes on the web. The other more fun way is to read fics that have good things. One I particularly like is "where your loyalties lie" by Ice Archer Girl. Okay fine she does Tala in an evil way but that's for starters. And she writes some of the least ooc fics in history of fanficiton.net. Then maybe you could try a decent one I think you might know it being a kai fan and all but "A scorched path" by Dawn35. Tala is not evil in htere but theres an ooc moment once or twice.
im not trying to be mean or superior, im just trying to help. Yeah.
Hope I've succeded
~UniGirl