prin69 2004-04-05 . chapter 1 i really like this. i was remembering Beka's face on the Maru as she pointed the gun at him. how she backed up and sounded unsure. this could really be what she was thinking. i like it alot. it's nice how it goes into her head, without sounding to 'girly'. how Beka says she loves him, but would kill him if he had to. i could see her doing that on the show. she did do it with Bobby, and most likely was planning to with Tyr, since she did try to shoot him. nice fic, great for a first. those are always so scary! happy writing, can't wait till the next. bye! |