 Tonnerre 2008-12-21 . chapter 1If only you knew Raz. Beautiful insight into his mind. |
 Varewulf 2004-05-26 . chapter 1Ok, I'm speechless. I have absolutely no idea what to say, except... Well done! You're so brilliant, you could light up all of Europe, nay, the world. I bow humbly and crown you queen of fanfics. |
 Spectral Sereda 2004-04-06 . chapter 1Masterful, you seem to have captured everything I think Raziel would be feeling at this time, and so much more besides.I especially liked the way you descibed his need for a vengeance that was bloody and hard won, his sense of being cheated by encountering a Kain who seemed weary, naive and unwilling to fight. Excellent! |
 Shadowrayne 2004-04-06 . chapter 1Oh my God Vladmir, you are a god. I love you! And what's this I hear about a challenge? Email me at shadowrayne_1579@yahoo.com with the details please. God, That use of Vae Victus was ingenious. You are an evil little woman. Tell Jon I said hi. |
 the_marmaladecat1 2004-04-06 . chapter 1 Nice, very nice.
There's a sadness to this piece in the way that it's written, a quiet despair behind the words that communicates the scene and all the threads of plotting that have led up to it quite perfectly.
The Hylden voice is great addition - just as I think it would have been.
Well done. :) |
 Komikitty 2004-04-05 . chapter 1Oh wow...That was SO COOL! The way you combinedhe anger at Kain with his weariness of the world was amazing...I feel rather inspired! Nice work! =^_^= |
 Syvia 2004-04-05 . chapter 1 *hugs the life out of you* That was great! ^^ Hashy & the Hylden were wonderfully subtle and I liked the flashbacks. Good use of the game dialogue and wonderful description of Razi's indigation. ^^ |
 Tom T. Thomson 2004-04-05 . chapter 1*claps* So fitting. So well writen. Good job! |