Is there going to be more to this story? I really thought it was a great story..very interesting..and its kept me hanging..wandering what comes next? I hope there will be another chapter or 2, let me know if there is...email me..DaBuffne@yahoo.com
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Pipsycat@aol.com

OMG! Don't leave us in suspense, that was one of the best stories I hav read in awhile, do finish it!
My only comlaint has to do w/formatting. It was a little ** the readers' eyes because ther were no line breaks, pragraph breaks etc. Unfortunately, one of FF.net's quirks is that if you save your document as anything other than HTML, all formatting is lost. TO prevent this, save your document as HTML and then upload it.

Hey your story is pretty good. I can't wait to see what happens next so keep on writing!! See ya later!!