Are you aware that the second part of your first chapter has exactly three line breaks even though there is a whole slew of dialogue? I doesn't look deliberate, but you might want to fiddle around with things and fix it.

WOW! i'm not all up for Ron stories, but i loved this one. Great story! ^_^

hey
this is a really good fic
umm, take care!
:)

Just finished reading this. Was very good. gtg, but I'm really liking the second story, so you'll definitely hear from me again!

This is great. It really hits on how Ron feels with Hermione being so smart and Harry being "The Boy Who LivedA", plus with all his brothers success. It's very interesting. Keep it up.

hey this is really original and interesting. keep writing!

how cool! I love this, what a unique idea! I love that play, so the title caught my eye. I hope you update soon, cuz I can't wait to read more! So creative, wow!
with luck and love,
-Lady C

Hey, i liked it! It really capitalizes on the way Ron sometimes feels around Harry and Hermione, left in the dust. Your story really draws people in. I didn't love the firecrackers part, but it might have been better if fred and george had noticed that their firecrackers were gone? Perhaps if people thought they did it?