The ending a bit to love-e-dovey for my likeing but otherwise very enjoyable.
parisindy 2004-04-06 . chapter 1
cool a nice little story
Super Unigirl 2004-04-06 . chapter 1
right, i need some help. i cant divide this story into chapters. I wrote it all before i put it on here so could someone tell me how to split it up into chapters?