Andelia 2004-04-06 . chapter 1You already know that I love it, but I had to come leave you a review here, too.
The whole premise is adorable, and I love the way you've written it. The first person pov was the perfect choice, and it came out just right. The way she read into 'his' actions was hillarious; 'he blushed and squealed in my grasp like an inexperienced youth' is a really good interpretation of how the seaQuest would act in that situation.
Oh, and last part was... *giggles* It was just too funny. |