hey, i've always liked your stories and this one is no exception. anyway, the phrase "I'll not ask for wine" came from a poem, not a song. either way, the fic. is still good.

SWEET! I saw that drinking episode a couple of days ago too! And yes! The spacing at the end was much improved! Very nicely done as always! Smiles and Hugs!
BTW I don't think that's a song. I think it's a Shakespearean sonnet. Or maybe from Romeo and Juliet. Not sure.

Nicely written and well-appreciated:) I like your style, simply elegant!!-.-!!

Wow. Profound, eloquent, rich symbolism. I really like this. And the hint of Sanzo-logic is indispensable.

aw. That was such a cute story!

This was just lovely! A wonderful coming of age story between two good friends. I loved it! Goku drunk is so sweet!

I love that line..'how could i not? I spent years with three drunks." Perfect! ^_^ And nail on the head too, considering the Sanzo-ikkou's habits. *grins*
Keep it up, girl..i'm here waiting so we can cause more mischeif here. *prods Gojyo and Hakkai for more story fodder, gets flipped off by the kappa*

aww, that was super cute! ^_^
p.s. it's called "song to celia" and it was written by ben jonson in 1616. the rest of the verses are really sweet and sappy.

so touching...kawaii...