Yay, yay yay yay! Consider this a bribe then LOL and I'm trying not to gush. Yes that was in character, oh gosh I love that hug at the end... yep the beginning of a beautiful relationship bwah!

Aww that was so good, you really have a knack for action, I can't tell you that enough, because I have now read many of these stories and most writers are not, so many loopholes involved, etc.

This was really good. It was funny, it was really heartwarming, yes that's the kind of friendship, they started with and the budding of LOURRVE lol

You also make really big things - really simple.

Thanks so much for this, it was awesome!

I'm just glad to see there is an end coming. You are terrific with fighting scenes, all that tactical element to it etc.

Just beautiful and once again, aw sniffle sniffle all the basics, foundation for a smooching SasuNaruSas LOL

I LOVE IT! It's beautiful that they were friends first, maybe rivals first, friends second and lovers third bwah!

I'm only a few paragraphs in but OH GUSH I love my err Sasuke's DOBE, LOL.

Tsukaki bwah! That's the Dobe alright and focusing so ** the blanket solution that he forgot to sense out the baddies, oh squishy squishy I love him lol

You know, when I first stumbled onto Naruto fanfic, I lapped everything up to quench and unquenching thirst. Unfortunately I discovered the first fics I read were probably the best ... and eventually learnt to be picky.

The first chapter though had a really good story, was not the best written. You saying it is deliberately written not for the Naruto series, kind of put me off but I'm so glad I continued.

You are really good as plausibility. All your action scenes, thought processes, I'm really impressed. Not to mention this story just gets better and better, sniffles!

I love it! What's better is you're getting better at writing this and it's so full of tension and just bubbling with all that SasuNaruSasu goodness that even they are not fully aware of yet... (insert evil maniacal fangirl glee laughter lol)

AWESOME!

This was the first fic I ever read XD Love it still.

Awesome! I loved it. And I think sasuke was in character. It was so good. I'm not sure I would have minded you ending it here. I liked how told about the fights. A lot of people write really bad fighting scenes. Thanks for writing! I'll be looking forward to your other stories.

loved every chapter of it!

Wow. You're a great author. I can't believe Sasuke actually passed out after entering the room, after all of that, that was the last thing I expected! Keep writing, you're good at it!

He He! Your story is full of awesomeness!

DAMN...you really got pre-timeskip Sasuke down in a nutshell. -blinks- At least...before he goes crazy and so forth. For this, I HAVE to say that I envy you. You write Sasuke with so much more grace than I even could imagine to. :D

Okies...onto the fanfic:

The idea with Naruto out of his body and the action/adventure part goes so seriously well. If there is one thing that I would die for in fanfics, it's good fight scenes, and you have a cutting edge style with the way you planned it. The fact that this is also about Naruto himself and his clever little bantering also makes my day. :D And, with Sasuke there to keep him company, who on earth wouldn't want to read this?

There's a sort of way that you wrote this, as well, that stands out. The words flow in a manner that is almost a form of storytelling, and the matter-of-fact tone suits the situation as well. I've heard many things about SasuNaru fanfics that warrant staying away from, and I've gotta say, those same factors never showed up in your story. :) Wonderful work here.

i loved it XD it was awesome!

fantastic! cute ending.

awesome! i can't believe you can write like what a 30 page chapter! that's so cool!...anyway... favourites...

as for bribe, i will let you have MY naruto for a day...that's a good deal right? Ü

~how amazing :)
i have never read a better naruto fanfic :D
i love it ~hehe, and i srsly think that naruto and sasuke, their personalities.. wow ^^;
i didn't comment on the first ones, but i read all of them and id just like to say that they are so well written, ^-^ completely amazing hahaha
~kimmy

Wow soo relieved!! Kakashi copied it!! :3
The end scene with sasuke being so cuddly was soo~ cuute... Nyuu~!!
Loved it. Very well written. 10/10