OMG!! You had me on a near panic on the second to last chapter! Girl you are great a writing story keep up the good work. Can't wait to read the sequl!!

Heh, this was amusing and hectic, the only thing that irritated me was hapless clients keeping information to himself when it could be relevant to the mission. Sasuke would have felt better if had known his not alone in his delusions :P

That was definitely excellent!
I LOVE IT!
5 STARS! :D

naruto... died... why?

awsomeness. heh. i really didn't expect sasuke to pass out like that. hehehehe

ok ok ok right time to review. um.
first chapter was heart stopping. well the ending was anyway good- tension and stuff. um. i kinda thought this would be angst cause of that.
but then the hilarity came and bit me in the arse. hehe. seriously sasuke's reaction and naruto and the whole thing was side-splitting. the enemies were quite cool too though i have one complaint- you really, really didn't do sakura justice. she's utterly pathetic in this. i know that she had a rocky beginning in the manga but you can't expect to portray a character correctly if you cling to first impressions and paradigms, or see them through hate-clouded glasses. or love-clouded glasses either. know what i mean? well at least you aren't really stabbing her character. i'm done now
love the story though, uh-huh

Did Naruto say he moved Sakura as well? Quit touching things Naruto! You're confusing me.

I really liked the way you wrote this one, I liked the way the room felt. The stopping and starting of the heater and the way you didn't reveal Sasuke initially. It made you feel like you were really watching it.

aww that was such a sweet ending! i loved it! the third chapter was by far the most exhilirating, damn you it was full of tension that just kept going - and that cliffhanger?! omigodz. (it was four in the morning, btw but for some reason i was WIDE AWAKE lol) i'm so going to read some more of your fics, they rock! ^_^ this story is definitely a favourite.

cute!

nice!

Oh, intersting!

I found your fic while reading a journal. I had a look and think it's a wonderful story. I like it how you've kept them to the original casting, making like themselves rather than too OOCed. I see a lot of people might also agree with me, but this is really one of the best SasuNaru fics I've read in...well a very, VERY long time. I hope you keep up the wonderful work! It'll be nice to read some more of your work later =P

Great Job!

Mi-chan aka MotherNight

^.^ Naruto can only directly affect anyone other than Sasuke while protecting him.

I've read this story a really long time ago, and I finally found it again! I think it's really good, so thanks for writing it!
Tam