Hey, I wish I could sign in again to do another review, but this will have to do. I read your story again and I still like it a lot. There's just something about Joan and Gavin that I like together. I hope you'll write more fanfictions about them. It would be nice to read about them when they're exploring a relationship, maybe when Joan is in college. One of the reasons I wanted leave another comment was that I was listening to Maroon 5's CD and when I heard the song, "She Will Be Loved", I thought of your story. I think the song really fits the story. Here are the lyrics to the song if you haven't heard it yet.
"She Will Be Loved"

"Beauty queen of only eighteen
She had some trouble with herself
He was always there to help her
She always belonged to someone else

I drove for miles and miles
And wound up at your door
I've had you so many times but somehow
I want more

I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile
And she will be loved
She will be loved

Tap on my window knock on my door
I want to make you feel beautiful
I know I tend to get so insecure
It doesn't matter anymore

It's not always rainbows and butterflies
It's compromise that moves us along
My heart is full and my door's always open
You can come anytime you want

I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile
And she will be loved
She will be loved

I know where you hide
Alone in your car
Know all of the things that make you who you are
I know that goodbye means nothing at all
Comes back and begs me to catch her every time she falls

Tap on my window knock on my door
I want to make you feel beautiful

I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
And she will be loved

[in the background]
Please don't try so hard to say goodbye
Please don't try so hard to say goodbye

Yeah
[softly]
I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain

Try so hard to say goodbye"

hmm...where should I start? I suppose I should start witht the thank-you. Due to this story and "A Price to Pay", I've gotten hooked on yet another UC ship. As soon as I read "A Price to Pay", I had to start looking for more stories you had written. The stories I've read so far are great. You've got the characters down to a T. You write Joan's voice especially well. Keep on writing Joan/Gavin stories and I'll keep on reading them. But just one suggestion. Just keep them friends until she graduates from high school. Once she turns eighteen, I would love to see them dating. O...this ship reminds me of Buffy/Giles. *Off to find other JOA fanfiction*

Darling you have got to hurry up and post more of this story! It is great! You have so got me liking the whole Price/Joan thing (which I admit I never would have thought of on my own).

Okay, so I know I reviewed already, but I thought maybe another would prompt you to write more. You've ruined me. I actaully like Price and Joan. I check this site anxiously for your next installment. *begs*Please write more soon!
Luv,
Sassy

I'll be the first to admit to being an Adam/Joan lover, but I LOVED how you handled this Joan/Price interlude! It was great. You would expect a storyline like this to be lewd, and a bit perverted... But you did a great job. I hope you do another installment of this story, I'd be interested in reading.

I liked the Sweet Water Falling series. Honestly, I like Joan and Adam, but sometimes their stories can get a little tiring. But I like different pairings, including Joan and Mr. Price. At least the way you write it.
Luv,
Sassy

weird to say the least. hmm.. ill have to sleep on this one. weird to say the least

I just have to say that even though I'm a die hard joan and adam fan I reall liked this story, as well as the last one that I read about price in the hospital. Please continue soon! ashleywiskow@yahoo.com

God, imagine waking up in your principal's bed... lol. This was very well done, I think you handled their characters very appropriately. I'm glad you didn't have overwhelming angst or groping or anything. That might have been too much ;)

wow there is more i liked it - but lol i am sorry but price kinda came off like a perv but lol its ok i liked it and it was good- i love the way u rite ur very detailed so i have a visual in my head- i'll admit the idea at first was kinda uhh ok but i gave it a chance and i thought it was cool- so wats the next chapter gonna involve lol adam and price dueling over joan that would be so funny

Wow. At first I was a bit wary about the Price/Joan pairing, but I decided to give it a shot because i knew that you were such a good writer. I liked the story. It wasn't weird like I thought it might be and seemed as if it wasn't too alternate universe. Actually believable. It could actually become part of the show if it wasn't for the obvious taboo pairing and all the problems and uproar that would cause. So congratulations, you got another person who is on her way to being a convert!

I loved A Price to Pay and this story was really great too. Can't wait for the rest of the series.

well, I had read this story a while back about Joan going to visit Gavin Price in the hospital. I had thoguth that they'd make a cute couple... I LIKE them as a couple and can't wait to see what you do with them inthe future! :)

E! YOU POSTED! As if you couldn't imagine the great surprise I found when I came back from the store to see this link staring at me when I took off my away message. I just about squealed through the whole thing! As I'm sure you know, I can't wait for more! Like I need to say that. *G*

there's so many words to describe this story... weird... disturbing... it was defenatly interesting, interest goes a long way w/ me, i guess we'll just have to wait and see what out people say