that chuck is a bastard! i want to kick his ass!

I loved the fic but why didn't Heero come to Duo's rescue is he going to make a dramatic entrance. I wonder what kind of special powers lou was mentioning. Anyway I hope some of this is answered in the next chappie and please update soon.

Read ya later,

Siren of the Darknessflame

yep, I kew you do it again, luv. I can't wait to see Heero, Trowa and the Bouncers beat the shit out of Chuck and his crew of pricks. Duo is a wild and fey creature. Like a bird, he needs to fly, like wild stallion, he's gotta run, You can't cage someone like Duo; you can't ley claim to hi,. IF you do, you'd kill his spiret, and thus kill him. His body might continue living and breathing, and his physical beauty may thrive for a wile, but inside he'll have died. That bastard Chuck is killing Duo; locking him in a cage. I can't wait to see Herro set the fey bird free.

faithfully r&r-ing,

Aden

AGGAIN WITH THE SUSPENCE!...you derive pleaseure fom this, don't you? I'll beta for you, luv, all you have to do is ask keep it up,I'm so loving the way this story seems to be going, and, as usual, I'm hubngaring for more of it. kisses, luv.

r&r-ing faithfully,

Aden

I was right, Chuck is a definite jerk. Why would Duo put up with him at all is a good question. Ok, Duo has been hit…where’s Heero? You would almost feel sorry for Chuck…almost. I hope this isn’t the end. It’s off to a great beginning.

Niere

Chuck sounds like a total jerk. How can he get upset with Duo if he’s making out with someone else? Hey, if it’s ok for one, it’s ok for both. Besides, like Duo said, Chuck doesn’t own him, right? And Heero is up there watching it all. Sounds like serious trouble is brewing. Interesting beginning.

Niere

Sunday or a month of Sundays?
Don't you know that it is May and you haven't updated yet?

this is great

it's short. better make the next one damned long. fun still though.

really interesting, just a bit on the short side. Looking forward to the next chapter!

;-) please update soon!

ooh . . . fun

I'm loving it, please update soon! ;-)