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Chichicken
2009-04-30 . chapter 4
You were right about Zoro's age- in manga Edo has answered to the questions about the characters and I think Zoro's age was then excactly 19 xD and if I remember right, others are also something around 17-20 ^^ but this seems like a good fic, please keep going!
crystalbluefox
2008-10-20 . chapter 4
Yo, you haven't been updating since... 2004?? that's four years, kid!! what the hell you think you're doing? Finish your stories, don't be as stupid as me! Your story here are so damn ** good that I wanna read MORE of it. So be nice and update soon, okay?

Zoro: Oi! Who's the ** ** there are tired of their sorry life?

Sanji: What's wrong, Moss-head, lost your candy?

Zoro: Shut the ** up, Curlbrow, some idiot have taking my swords!

Luffy: (pointing) Bluefox haves them.

Zoro and Sanji: NANI?!

Usopp: Sh-she-she l-l-l-looks p-p-pretty a-a-a-a-angry.

Chopper: (runs screaming away and hides behind Sanji and Zoro... together with the 'great captain' Usopp.)

Sanji: Oh **!

Zoro: Who's that ** idiot, there have gotten her THAT MAD?!

Me: Please SinisterBug? Update? Soon?

Luffy: ...Since when did she learn to handle three swords? Ah! Zoro, your learned her, right?

Zoro: No hell, that's too dangoures.

Sanji: (Kicks Zoro in the head) Baka! She have been copying you? Stop training so much in the near of her.

Zoro: THE HELL SHOULD I MNOW THATSHE WOULD DO THAT?

Usopp: S-S-S-SinisterB-B-Bug, p-p-please udate s-s-s-soon on this story... I don't wan't to die this young...!

Zoro: YOU JUST DAMN ** HAVE TO UPDATE...NOW!!

Sanji: OI! Talk nice to the ladies, **-head! Lovely SinisterBug-chan, we would really much appriciate that you soon would update this story very soon.

Me: (calm smile) yes... pleasee, dearest SinisterBug?

Sanji and Zoro: Oh **! Calm smile, not good!!
Araucaria
2008-10-05 . chapter 4
... so my choice is OR Death? Well I'll have the chicken then.

Well uh, anyway. I'm intrigued by this story... but now I've just looked at the publish date versus the last updated date. Four years is a long time. But maybe you're just on uber hiatus. I know how that goes. Well if you ever feel like writing. I'd like to see what happens. =D

Cheers!
Skriblerier
2008-06-03 . chapter 4
Going to update this story? Wanna read more ^^
Shadow Vampira
2007-11-08 . chapter 4
I've come to the conclusion that you have indeed died. It has been so many years since you've reviewed. I shall pray for your wandering soul.
Shadow Vampira
2007-11-08 . chapter 2
I read it all even at the end...I KNEW THAT DISH WASHING SCENE SOUNDED FAMILIAR!! *finishes reading the other chapters*
Grazchan
2007-08-27 . chapter 4
Hey, love the story! (or rather: I
I'm Blond. James Blond.
2007-04-03 . chapter 4
you. must. update. It's so CRUEL to leave people hanging here! why did you forget this story? it hasn't gotten anywhere yet! you still have to finish it, before you can 'just' leave it here, on your profile! otherwise, people will read it, see it's forgotten by it's writer, and be left hanging! I know, they will move on, but it's still cruel! this is how the frustrated teenagers are born!

I hope you understand my ramblings, because I'm really, really begging you to finish this fic...
Thief of Spades
2006-06-15 . chapter 4
I like cake...

Aw, good 'ol Zoro! A quality source of entertainment since '91

Update please!
Kagami
2006-05-21 . chapter 4
cool... I like this one a lot. you have really kept the characters in...well, character. And you are right about Zoro. he is 19. It was in a shonen jump. But luffy is 17, not 14 or 15. otherwise, great job. I really like this one...I said that already...oh well, I will wait like Luffy waits for his next round of meat! ^_^
Yuki Kokoro
2006-05-12 . chapter 4
I feel slight pain that this story has been abandoned, but oh well. What you have is still very interesting. Zoro being *forced* to share his past, and Sanji gets to see it. Possibly the most in-character background sharing I've seen. ^_^ Sanji gets to slowly build an understanding and sympathy for Zoro, and while he's risking his life too... so happy.

So far I'm also extremely happy by the way Zoro and Satsuya seem to act very much like Sanji and Zoro... and they become lovers... and Sanji gets to see it... pretty much it looks like this story could lead to some very joyful fangirl moments for me. *grins*

But since I know I'd have way more luck pestering you into writing more for In Dreams... I'll save my groveling for there. *nods* You get major props for the "cake or death" Eddie Izzard reference at the end of this chap though.
Yuki Kokoro
2006-05-12 . chapter 2
Ah! Is very very intrigued. This plotline seems very original and totally like something that would actually happen in the Grand Line. Inexplicable darkness forcing one of our favorite characters to go through a test of mental anguish?! Yay!

I wonder if the other members of the crew will be able to see him... (not that he'd know)...
pitupaso
2006-02-21 . chapter 4
Sounds interesting, I can't wait to see what you make out of this story.

For your info, it's officially mentioned that Zoro and Sanji are both nineteen. Luffy and Usopp are both 17, and Nami is 18.
Tankar
2006-02-18 . chapter 4
asdfiuqhrk?!?!?!

Last update was in 04?! x_x Nu! You must finish! I hate OCs to the BONE not to mention pairing them up. . . But. . . I want some SanjixZoro so I'm hoping there is some! @_@ Lol. . . Sorry. . .

Great story! I like how you have Zoro in this one. . . though a bit more hung up on righteous than I'd figure. . . But really nice ; ; I like it and I'm sad yet another is old school T-T I haven't watched the OP anime or even read more than a few chapters via Shonen Jump, but I like S x Z so I hope you continue~ ^^

Love love,
-tankar
hanjuuluver
2006-02-08 . chapter 4
what about cake? oh well... love the story, and even though u havent updated for... 2 years! I still hope that you will get a sudden blast of inspiration and update. i like Zoro, and don't realy give a damn about gay-ness, so please continue!
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