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| whisper99 2005-09-06 ch 1, | abuseWow...that was fantastic! For a minute there I thought you were going to kill them both off. Then I thought you killed Jack! Wow! This is great. I'd like to see them talk about what happened :) |
| banner 2004-06-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was incredible. Thanks. |
| BizzyLizzy 2004-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good, especially the part where Daniel's about to get out the crayons and colouring book!! |
| Willo 2004-04-22 ch 1, | abuseGa! I thought you were gonna kill them! Go you for keeping interest. ^__^ I liked the two-sider.. and I agree with previous reviwers; I got no slash out of this. Yah!. |
| MaireadInish 2004-04-18 ch 1, | abuseExcellent story. Nice the way they argued over who was more important. Any more on the way? |
| pettygrew 2004-04-07 ch 1, | abuseGreat suspense at the end there. Love it when you write about Jack/Daniel. Now, what about Dreams? |
| dietcokechic 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abuse{{claps loudly}} This was wonderful! Supurb! Damn good! loved the Jack and Daniel voices- loved the story idea-- loved the whole damn thing!! Now if you wanna do a little follow up with Sam and Teal'c-- that'd work for me too. |
| Dimac99 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abuseA really good story and very well written. I didn't think it was slash-y at all; it's nonsense to suggest that any fic that brings Jack and Daniel close together in some way is slash or has a slash element. But then, some people can read that into *anything* and didn't you say that Michael Shanks himself said many fanfic writers were obsessed with homosexuality? ;-) I also loved the *bunnysicle* thing, I had to take a moment to calm myself before reading the story because of that! |
| Katerina 2004-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery well written. I especially love the end. I really thought you were going to let one or both of them die. Yay for happy endings! :-) |
| Pam 2004-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story! Wish they could come up with something this angsty on the show! Pam |
| parisindy 2004-04-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseexcellent! good job! |