These are my thoughts exactly!

That was hilarious. It fits fights with pairings.

lol. I like it! I'm glad your mom liked it too. :)

This is wonderful! I like how it fits with the rhyme scheme of a sonnet so well, and yet it's still so original. Very witty. Nicely written!

Okay, where does your mind come from? Never in a thousand years would a mere earthling be able to achieve these withering heights of extreme Shakespeare parody.

HEHE!

me loves! 'specially since i was assigned sonnet XXVII for a class.

I oughtta show this one to me own mum!

This is a review for your second Benvolio fic, for some reason, I'm not able to review that story of yours because the review button is not there...Anyways, that story was good, but I think I enjoyed the first one better! Good work!
Chandi

Very cute! I can't believe I found another Shakespeare and Harry potter fangirl rolled into one! You're like me! _
We seem to have a lot in common...Are you me?...I happen to have just turned 15 on the 19th of April. I'm so excited, I was asked to perform at the Shakespeare festival that's on soon! *does happy dance*
Anywho, I have to get back to my Romeo and Juliet essay which is due tomorrow! aarrg!
Happy writing!

_ Shel

btw, you spelled evanescence wrong. (sorry, I'm a picky speller, and it's my fav. band)

Amusing, but not a true sonnet; iambic pentameter has 10 syllables per line, alternating unstressed/stressed. Iambic means unstressed/stressed, and penta is five, so it's five couplets of unstressed/stressed syllables. So yours is more of a free style sonnet but your emotion is one that I, and undoubtably many others, have felt at some point.

Hey...your sonnet was actually pretty good...it followed the rhyme scheme and everything and I think it was funny too! I should show my mom. But although you didn't include iambic pentameter it was still good. That's what makes Shakespeare's work so amazing. All of his sonnets have the same rhyme pattern and every line has 14 syllables (the iambic pentameter). Trust me when I found out all I was doing was counting. That's why he stresses and doesn't stress some stuff - to add or take away syllables. I hope the info was useful and email me some more of your poems. You've got potential.

Oh wow, I'll put you on my fav authors list. You're really good! And no, Sydney is NOT better than Melbourne. But then, I'm probably going to start a war or something with such talk... carry on, oh foolish sydney-sider, for thou art foolish in thy 'wisdom'.

Lol. I like it. I'm not surprised your mum found it funny. It is. Nice that she's got a good sense of humour though. :)