i loved it. Not as good as Lying awake and Praying but it was still so good. keep it up

The identity of Darra's father didn't really surprise me, but for a moment there, I kinda hoped he'd turn out to be Isaaru. :D

I don't think rewriting and reposting this fic in the future will be necessary – yesterday, I reread all chapters in one sitting (sadly enough, it wasn't too difficult, the whole thing's way too short for my taste) and I found myself marveling at your storytelling abilities. Angst and suspense were very well done, you gave us a puzzle and kept solving it by adding all the missing pieces, instead of explaining everything straight away. Seymour's pregnancy was shown in a believable, realistic way – no matter how impossible it may sound. Besides, I liked your OCs, Heba and Riana, in particular. I actually cared/ sympathized with them, and that's /not/ some-thing I can say about most OCs in this fandom.

Heh, I guess I'll stop repeating myself here. In any case, many thanks for wring (and finishing ^^) this story! Yes, the content was utterly disturbing :P, but I loved every single sentence!

First off, thanks for reviewing SiS. It means so much for a fellow Seymour fangirl to notice my work. And there will actually be another story diverging off from SiS at one point that heavily involves him... That's all I'm saying.

Second off, on your story: Wow. I'm not much of a yaoi fan, though I do read smut once in a while, but this was a pairing that actually made SENSE. And the explanation of Seymour being a hermaphrodite made it that much more believable, not to mention how it explains certain interactions.

YOU CAN'T LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT!! Make up some kind of one-shot or another story to resolve the cliffhanger in the last real chapter. Does Darra go the way of her father? TELL US!

I have to tell you that I really enjoyed this. It was so well-written that any doubts about the premise were wiped away.

I did guess it was Auron, but it was only a guess until the end. Very good read!

E, great end. I really liked the epilogue; concise but concluding. And the father wasn't an uncreative choice. :-) Even though I've encountered some Auron x Seymour stuff recently, in all my stupidity, I didn't guess the other father was him. XD Congrats on finishing a great, original story on a high note. :-D I wish I could finish my stories, too. XDD *faves!*

It was worth the wait, medear- well done. This is a very complete, thought provoking, medical drama story: one which could have not been written by anyone else. The epilouge especially sets all that.

If you ever get writing another fan-fic, i'll be sure to review each individual chapter (simply because I want to).

Hey, don´t keep me on the edge, man! Why aren´t you updating already? ^__^ I want to see, no, I DEMAND to see more of this fic because it´s so great!! ^__^

He-loves-me-not.

Well, I think it's great, as usual. :] Hell, if anyone'd told me, say, a year ago, that I'd be reading a non-humorous fic 'bout my favorite bishie made hermaphrodite, and enjoying it so much, I would've laughed in their face. Still, the truth is, your work happens to be one of the best Seymour-stories out there. And the strange, bittersweet content makes it only all the more interesting.
Please, keep up the awesome work! :)

i've been reading this off-and-on, so forgive me for not reviewing this as much as i should have. ;_; But it's really interesting. like another reviewer said, despite the unnatural plot, it still goes on very smoothly. :-) I like the ending of the newest revised chapeter, too. Keep it up :-)

Hey, it´s okay if you don´t update so often, look at me: It takes months for me to start to write another chapter! Yay the lazyness! ^__^

But...

Oh gods! This chapter was keeping me on the edge the whole time! Very well done! But what will happen to the baby? Why did the midwife lie to Seymour? Are they going to kill it?! Ah! Oh, maybe I´m just over-reacting, but still. A chapter full of suspense. again: very well done!

Cheers! ^__^

I'm impressed by the smooth and natural way in which the bizarre plotline evolves. I think a story like this would easily turn ridiculous if it was described by a less skillful writer, but you somehow make it sound totally 'right'. Besides, your style is beautiful.
What are you still doing writing fanfiction? Start writing literature immediately! :)

Whoa! The last line was great! Heheh...absolutely fantastic. Seymour is getting more weirder...I love this. Keep it up, I can´t wait to read more of this!

hello.

I haven't read yet but I will next time. I still have classes :) I'll be late.

I just want to say that I did left an end note saying "I didn't wrote this for myself- not for my own literary betterment." I didn't wrote it for myself. My faith can't be easily shaken by those sort of things, I'm relaying a message to all who witnessed it and find themselves doubting.

I did not wrote it for myself.

sorry for bringing this here because I can't find your e-mail add. I'm really really sorry.

please smile for me. I meant this as an explanation of my action that was misrepresented.

Thanks for sharing your opinion though.

~Bahaghari

Why did my author alert only go off now if this chapter was put up before January...Oh well...Still an excellent story but hurry up! You're killing me with the suspense. I don't believe I've reviewed every chapter but that's only because I generally got an alert while I was rushed. So instead of getting off immediately I would read a chapter of this (which I didn't have time to do in the first place) and run off.

Either way you're wording is still excellent. You FAR surpass me in your skill so I really have no critasism for you.

I meant to review sooner... but things came up. Stupid computer problems...

Anywho, all I can really type right now is... wow... with lots of periods... god, I'm so sorry. But, it's just that your work makes me want to work harder, and that what I already have up is a piece of shoopuf crap... if that makes any sense at all...

Oh, and thanks for reviewing my story! 'Tis very lovely indeed! Lots of gil to you! (I did change the name though, if you were wondering...)

-KMH