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| KittyKittyHunter 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseNice poem. Interesting theme, if a tad obvious... hmm... I wouldn't say that 'shadow' is the antonym of 'angel'. Maybe 'demon'. Oh, and you really have to remember to include a disclaimer. Nice work otherwise. ~Kitana~ |
| Misura 2004-07-05 ch 1, | abuseA touching and engaging piece of poetry, that's deep yet simple at the same time. One thing I'm not quite sure of is whether any of the hikaris would describe themselves as an 'angel'; they seem much too modest for that most of the time. But that's just me. A lovely poem! :) |
| Ril 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI like it, real sweet! |
| Kiyoshi 2004-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is good...yet sad |