Bellatrix would do something twisted like "breed" with someone that wasn't her husband, but I don't think she'd go to Sirius. I'm not sure how I feel about the idea of Sirius encouraging James and Lily to have Harry, but - whether I like it or not - it's creative.

Great last line, and Sirius clearly hasn't met the twins!

what an idea ! (I seemed to be saying that a lot lately... but it's youy fault, having a new amazing idea with each story ! ^^)
Bellatrix's offer was just stunningly funny... though it did looks like her a lot to do something like that ! ( "we were bred", ik)
Of course it's always a bit sad when we know what will happen to the Marauders and to Red (love the nickname !), but their reflexions about having child or not during war were very interesting !
Hey, fortunately Harry's here... as the Weasley twins to be the new Troublemakers-in-Chief !

Lovely. Really twisted, I'd actually imagined writing an incest fic... there is something so oddly entrancing about the subject, similar to the urge to follow ambulances when they go by... The Fred and George...foreshadowing? Was well done. This one shot could easily be a longer piece... hmm. I liked it mucho.

lovely, again. You really manage to create a realistic atmosphere with just some little, well placed details.

Ah, my jealousy strikes again...you write very, very well - damn you. I'll have to read more of your work when I get the time - it's hard enough finding decent SBRL fics and I've stumbled upon an absolute trousseau of brilliant ones...lucky me. ^^ The Sirius you portrayed here, Bellatrix, Remus, Lily and James - they were just the way I imagined them to be; I'm in awe. Write more soon...I'll be sure to read...

~Shuffle Queen~

I love this fic. I almost wish Bellatrix stepped up her plan- fed sirius a love potion or imperiod him or something and then where's the poor baby? I'm glad Sirius was tempted but didn't.

I don't normally read Sirius/Remus slash, but I just love this scenario that arose from it. And, of course, the writing was great too. I rather liked your Bellatrix, and her interaction with Sirius. Overall I really, really enjoyed this story.

too cute. and merlin, is sirius's family ever messed up. sounds like something bellatrix would do though.
i'd love to see a sequel to this involving remus discovering the content of bellatix's proposal. sure he'd make a good parent, but does remus want children? wouldn't he be terrified that they'd wander in during the full moon and the wolf would kill or bite them?
on the other hand, assuming that sirius isn't really dead (HE'S NOT! HE'S NOT I TELL YOU! NEVER!) perhaps remus and sirius would consider having childeren after the war?
-venny

I never can get over just how well you write these characters. Sometimes I wonder if you're JKR herself. ^_^

I've read all your fics, but there's something about this one that I can't get away from. Just that heavy air of foreshadowing that hangs over the whole thing. It's very . . . sad.

But beautifully done!

You are truly talented, and have obviously done your homework, not only with the HP series, but with all and any forms of classic literature. I'll always be honored that I was the first person to review "Go Back to Being Friends."

Keep the writing up! Love it when you grace us with the puppy love. ^_^

Well... what could I say that hasn't been said yet?
I love it (very much).You make them seem very real, like in your other stories.
And I love Sirius replies. It’s just wonderful their conversation.
It's just incredible how Bellatrix can really think about that option. It makes you realize all the ‘pureblood matter’, Bellatrix wants her son/daughter to be like her, so she decides to ask Sirius to be the father. Because they believe it’s more important to have good genetics and pureblood than love. It’s simply egoistic and inconsiderate but… well; it’s what they believe… that’s why they are fighting for Voldemort’s, no?…
And yes, I know most of the things I’ve said (if not all of them) had been said before… but today I feel like writing a review.
[Sorry for my more than probable mistakes. English is not my first language, neither the second one ^^U]

WOW.

The whole story was absolutely wonderful, but I have to admit my favourite part was Bellatrix's dialogue--amazing! It's so characteristically vain and egotistical--she can't produce a child who is an exact copy of her, so she chooses the father whom she thinks she has the most in common with. My God. I found myself wanting to read her lines out loud; I think I might have mouthed a few of the more poignant ones. I also loved Sirius' replies. "Go screw Regulus." "A sheep, like my husband." "Go screw Lucius Malfoy."

Beautiful.

A bit of a non sequitur, but Bellatrix's attitude reminded me of something I heard someone say the other day: "I do not have friends. I have minions and followers. Friends are for those who believe they have equals."

Keep writing!

Woo! new story!
Okay, first: that was totally gross of Bellatrix. I mean, ew! I really liked the way Sirius got out of it, though. Wold have liked to see the reaction of teh others if he had told them, but then again, it must be quite embarassing to confess. Good story! *tumbs up*

Well, I must say I just loved this fic. As every time you write about them, you make the characters seem amazingly real, it's just as if you gave them real live...
The originality of this fic is what really impressed me. I love the fact that you write about James' paternity from Sirius point of view, because it's a good way to show Sirius feelings about that topic.
And I found really interesting the conversation between Sirius and Bellatrix, not only for the strange proposal she makes him, but for the information of the Black family that's given through the conversaton too.
And just one last stupid thing... I liked the detail about the word "agarophobia"... I don't know why, but I found it funny. I suppose that's because I love languages too much...
Well, that was a very long review... I hope there aren't many important mistakes in it, it's difficult for me to say all what want in english...
Anyway, I hope to see more of your fics soon.

It ends like that or have more chapters? It's interesting