that was great. something of how the show should have went instead of him just saying it and leaving and us never knowing what they were thinking. great story

brilliant. beautiful. exactly the way it should have been, at least a little closure.

Ok first of all, I HATE, absolutely HATE, ABHOR, LOATHE rewrites of episodes. Like seriously, I despise reading them because it's like helo, it's been done with!
However, it is only out of great respect for you, because you are seriously the greatest Gilmore fanfic author in the history of everness, that I decided, ok, let's give this a shot. And, I must say that this is a fantastic piece done by you. It was really nicely done by drawing out Rory's emotions as well as, as always, Jess's character of self-defense but vulnerable side only when he's with Rory.
As usual, you have proved to me again that you are truly a great author. The JK Rowling of GG fanfic I must say.

Wow, I don't usually read Lit, but I really liked this! I love how you explained what must have been going on in Rory's mind and then gave her the chance for more closure than she got in the actual episode. I'm going to pretend this is what actually happened. It's more satisfying than the show was!

Wow, that was amazing. I absolutely loved it! I wish you'd added it sooner, I haven't read many Nag Hammadi... rewrites but this one is amazing! I can only wish the show had turned out like that at least. With her responding.
Again, amazing writing and I can't wait to read something else new of yours!

This is a really good re write. All the other re writes are preatty lame, all ending with Jess staying or something other than talking happening between them but we all know thats unrealistic. But I enjoyed this re write.

Hey!
Although this was a really excellent re-write of the actual episode with great dialogue, it's still not one of my favorites. I guess it's not interesting enough or resembles the episode too much, but I'm sure a lot of people will like it more than the other versions.
Bye, smile :-)

I'm furious with you, or with your self-esteem anyway, and very curious as to what other fabulous works you deprive us starving readers of. I'm not entirely sure you are capable of writing something that's not worthy of our reading. And an incoherent stream of conciousness from you would be better than most of the crap that's posted on this site. And this is far better than my little jess returns re-write. Give yourself some credit.

If only it had gone that way...