Will you ever completed the fic or had you given up on it already? I remember me i 1st read fanfic... it was one of your story but not on ff.net then... if i am not wrong you are the one to intro me to this site...anyway been away fanfic for sometimes and discovered that one of my fav fic is still not completed or update *sighs* so was life huh? i really hope that you will continued the fic and update this fic in the near future :) It was a goofd fic and one of my fav fandom :P

Hi!

You soooooo MEAN! A story like this MUST be finished! But I can understand. Surely, you have others priorities... Well, I hope that someday, you will publish another chapter.

Really, I like your story. In the start, you focused in Kirika and her walk in the night. Just enought to attracted the reader. Then, this encounter between Kirika and Mireille, as intriguing as the anime. Kirika's fascination for Mireille, like the game of 'cat and mouse'. Their second encounter, violent but necessary, is interesting 'cause it's introduce Kirika in the 'Human world'. And now, the mystery behind the watch.

With all that, my curiosity is very... Well, let's say that I was upset when I was in the end of the chapter... I'm suprised that you went so far in this to give up now! That's so unfair for you and for your fans (or readers whatever!)

But, like I said, I can understand. It's your story and your time...But, I'll hope that someday... 'cause this story deserve it.

Thanks again for this story. Have a nice day! Bye!

Wow. Love this latest installment.

I noticed that you haven't updated this fic in a while. Do you intend to continue it? It really seems too good of a fic for you to give up on it now, especially after all the work that you've put into it. And I certainly enjoyed reading it. )

LOVED this chapter. However, there are a few moments that are inconsistent with your universe.

During the fight:

"Bouquet would doubtfully be able to kill her under any circumstances but still, being outwitted by a human was unacceptable."

I thought that being immortal, Kirika COULDN'T be killed.

"One of them would be killed, and the next set of minutes would decide whom."

Again, this doesn't make sense, because isn't it technically impossible to kill Kirika? So really, Mirielle is the only one who could possibly be killed; therefore the "decision" isn't really there.

Anyway, just some small bits that jumped out at me. I LOVED YOUR WRITING. Wow, that action scene was just absolutely amazing. Wow, wow, wow.

Okay, on to the next chapter!

This is an excellent story that manages to be largely AU while keeping the characters personalities recognizable. The action scenes are nice and the descriptive work is good, as evidenced by the similes in the last paragraph of this chapter "like a leaf in an autumn storm" is a particularly nice turn of phrase.

And a reluctant hitwoman who is helping an amnesiac partner she doesn't fully trust but feels more sympathy for than she likes to admit investigate a conspiracy? Sounds like your pie is not just good but pretty close to Noir, in its own unique way.

Sadly, I found this on someone's favorites list and it seems it hasn't received any attention in a while.

Hey Shigan!

This is THE best Noir-based fanfiction I have ever read! Seriously, I'm not kidding at all. The idea of a vampire Kirika intrigued me, and your personal characterisation of Vamp-Kirika is great, as well as your emphasis on the fallibility of vampires - it's a nice change from all the "invincible, immortal, completely superior undead" spiel drifting around lately.

Your grammar and punctuation is very good, but I picked up on a few mis-spelt, missing, or contextually inccorect words occasionally - it's not glaringly obvious, but to a pedantic person like me... well, since this is such an awesome story, I'm willing to let these errors slide ;). Your descriptions are really good as well, not vague or overtly excessive.

How you stringed Mireille and Kirika together was really clever, using the pocket watch again (I'd almost forgotten about it, to be honest _'). You're leaving me very insanely curious as to how the watch fits into everything, especially how it affects Kirika so, and this chapter hasn't helped much... (*hint hint, nudge, nudge* Update?)

Are Chloe and Altena going to be making any significant contribution to this story, by the way?

And in regards to your question, I think you're adding your own eleven secret herbs and spices to the traditional Noir pie. It's considerably related to the original concept of Noir, enough so that we (or at least I) can relate to it and feel some familiarity, but it's also different enough so that you're leaving us guessing... a lot... -.-

Anyway, to end this rather lengthy review (but I have to admit, this story really does deserve long reviews) I really hope you haven't discontinued this, seeing as you haven't updated it in four years... you're still going to continue with this, right?

Waiting anxiously,

Viedyn.

P.S. Very nice job so far, I applaud thee, good sir/lady!

*whines at you* update already please?

Well I didn't have high hopes for a Noir vampire fic, but you're doing an excellent job. A pity you built it up to such an exciting point and then discontinued it though. :'( How painful for your readers...

Please write more! It actually follows Noir pretty well, and the characters are not OOC! I love it! Please, please, PLEASE write more! PLEEAASE!

OMG! Yes, it is VERY Noir! You have perfectly mangaged to make all the signifigant aspects of Noir meld together seamlessly!Write more! XD

That is a good fic too bad that you haven't updated it.

I felt like rereading your story. It's an awesome Noir fic and I really interested in what's going to happen next. I hope you find the time to write more of it. Please update. )

Ah... Noir. My first anime ever.

Your fics are great, and this one is particulary outstanding. Any thoughts of continuing it?

Please?..

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oh man...the waiting for the new chapter always get to me, like a junkie waiting his next fix, waiting and waiting, then having it done with and back to waiting and waiting again...yup, im a junkie on fics.

i like your appoach on the story, hey the way beetrain build up their relationship in the anime is what make noir a great anime, so im not going to denied this fic that, but the pervert in me scream for some HABF, if not maybe a kiss or two yeah, that all i have to say for now