anglgrlie 2004-08-01 . chapter 1 that's cute. I love the fluff! Will you write another chapter? |
pdlegirl 2004-07-08 . chapter 1That was cute! I needed a nice, fluffy story! Thanks! |
Sailor J-chan/DuoxHilde 4ever 2004-04-25 . chapter 1I like fluffiness! Very cute. |
dnd4ever 2004-04-06 . chapter 1the world needs alittle mushy, fluffy, gooey love. |
athenakitty 2004-04-06 . chapter 1Have Arthur and Molly been going steady in Hogwarts? |
coffeemione 2004-04-06 . chapter 1Um... it was cute! Very fluffy, yes. I like fluff. But your A/N was a little weird... "A/N- Pure fluff but I like it so phooey on you and your stupid ** dog too." ? Okay... Well, I hope you can find time to review and read my story Behind Closed Doors too. |
brandon chang 2004-04-06 . chapter 1 wow... u're thingy is great but it kinda has too much dialog. makes it really boring and it makes it look like a baby wrote it. Overall u're writing should be about a D + to C - range |