Nice little story, I was happy with the way it moved along.

Aside from that mention of Gotham city and the fact that we have no clue how the two got together it was a nice story. Still like the Shield story best of all your work though.

Although a X-Men fan from way back in my teens, I have always been uncomfortable with straight stick Scott Summers with Jean Grey, but they always worked for Marvel.

This has a better feel of love that the comic (this from a 50 happily married male, go figure).

Anyway, thanks for a good read.

May the MUSES always be with you!

-_

great fic

Nice work.

nice idea, the pairing of the two, through you keep changing focse from one char or thing to another is a bit annoying, and most of ths story is cramped into one long para thats eye hurting
other then that simple ad sweet good work.

That was realy good. I thought it was sweet.

Um...no. Jean and Scott FOREVER!

original, and good. You do need to work on your paragraphs, but so did I when I started writing, and you picked up on it faster then I did.