wow... that was brilliant, you're really a very talanted writer. the poem at the end, was it your own?

it just set off the chappie brilliantly... gonna go read the rest. ;)

So emotional… so sad but yet wonderful.
Very *very* well written, you got the characters down wonderfully.
I don’t know if you plan on continuing this series but I gotta tell you, I would love to see more.
Wow… you made me cry…