Great look inside Angel's head. I really enjoyed this.

This is excellent. I find it interesting that he could forget his demon, even for a moment, but it makes sense. He lives with it under him every day, and he wasn't there when it got out to play, and she was. It's an interesting observation. I also enjoyed his thoughts about his maturity. Angel doesn't act much older than a teen a lot of the time, which bothered me at first, until you think about what little opportunity he had to mature in his past. You point that out and do a good job with it. Ah, Angel musings. I hope you do more sometime.

That was really good.

I like it! Very in-character for Angel.

Hey this is pretty good! You did get the brooding this down well. Will you be adding more?