What! u can't end it just like that!! I like the story and I wish that you'd do a sequel... and I'm really crossing my fingers that that sequel will include a happy ending! =)

Ch 4
“What I’m trying to show here is that supervisors should not be sleeping with their employees. It’s wrong, morally and ethically. I’m not bashing anyone, but it shows favoritism and ultimately strains many relationships and trusts in the workplace.

Ch 3

Love the song. I don’t think I’ve ever heard it before but it fits the story ;)

»Catherine waits for Grissom to answer in vain, hanging up after only 2 rings. She knows where he is, what he is doing, who he is with.

Its so sad...*sobs*...
I think its really nice... hope to read more of it soon!=)

Plese, do not because of Catherine's jealous remarks make Grissom regret the one thing he should be doing and that is having a life with Sara. Grissom should not regret what is going on because of some remarks made by Catherine who should not have been walking around in the first place.
Update soon.