super sweet! it was sad... but i like that sort of thing... makes you want to swoon at the end... good story!

You damn bastard! Why did you end it like that? Good story though. You bastard...

Nice way to ask! This was a wonderful story. Personally, I'm a HUGE Taiora fan, and its nice to read awesome Taiora fics like this one. I almost cried! Keep up the good work! This will help you when you apply for college. Believe me, I KNOW!

star cross lovers, i love this1

AW... THAT WAS SO CUTE =), IT WAS SAD BUT I REALLY LOVED IT, AND I MYSELF DON'T LIKE MATT VERY MUCH, BUT I THINK IT WAS A LITTLE HARSH FOR HIM TO KILL BOTH TAI AND SORA! ANYWAY LOVED YOUR STORY. TAIORA FOREVER!

*sniff* so, beautiful ... *sniff* ... so ... adorable ... *sob* ... evil ... evil ... matt ... evil ... *sniff* ... so sad ... dead ... *cry* ...

It was really really good. except for one tiny detail. You have too many really long time gaps. Other thatn that it is absolutely fantastic! (^_^) *sigh* why did ff.n have to delaete all those thingys from stories? sorry. I'm being my whiny self again.

Ja Ne!,

Acalanatha465

*sniffle* That was so good. I'll most definatly be adding this to my favorite bar. This was so sad too . . . . *sniffles agian*

HI HI! lol um I ahven't read ur fanfic yet but I will lol! Bai! ^-^

Oh, i just love this story SO much that I'm printing it out and putting it in my Treasured FanFiction Stories binder. This is definately a keeper. I love it to pieces. PLEASE PLEASE write more taiora stories.

God sum ppl r just *beeps* huh? I mean don't ff.net look into da complaints instead of taking away da stories? bet they do but I'm just annoyed wiv dem myself at da mo -.-
Anyway very touching and the poem was very moving *^.~*
Keep writing
luv
*^.^* Sora_star_child *^.^*

Alvin, this is my pen name I DID update in May so nyah!

-Aly

This was OK. To improve this you should show, rather than tell, and paragraph whenever someone speaks, making it easier to read. :) But other than that, you have potential as a writer. I like your vocabulary usage, and the poetry, it's very simple, but pretty.

not bad. not bad at all. it'll be better if you put matt dead or something but then again it's good.

heyhey! i really enjoyed this. sad and sweet ^_^
Very cool.
keep writing.