I love this, but there is one flaw, YOU NEED TO UPDATE.

Oh-ho-ho, yes! Now this is a story. If you're going to keep going with this, awesome, I'll read every chapter of it.

That's odd...it says theres only one chapter and its the only one I can access and read...

Hmm. You rewrote this. I thought you abandoned this thing altogether.

But whatever. This incarnation of the first chapter is CLEARLY better than the previous. Not to mention funnier.

Keep it up!

uh-oh! poor cream. next chappie plz! espio is such a grump!

I luff this story! I really hope you continue it soon!

I do wish you'd update this sometime

All in all, an interesting story, so continue soon.

Oh Cream is six, and not eight, you said earlier that she was six in this chapter and that was right. Also, Espio's lucky that was not me, because I know quite a few obscenities, and I know lots of things to call him. Still I compliment her on facing off against him.

Actually in Knuckles Chaotix, the Sega 32x game, Charmy was sixteen. Just thought you ought to know, so he might be older later on down the road.
Espio's a real moody character, and if you need hlep with Mighty, I can, I know pretty all there is about him.

I love it I NEED you to make more chapters OR else you gonna' wake up to a dead chao in your bed! Okay?!?!? ^-^

Nice job, hope to see more. This story is very entertaining.

Hi, I"m starfighter48 and I really like this story. It has a nice plot but when I found out Cheese died, that made me sad. Chaos are pretty cool but I guess that if the story had to include that happening, then that is okay. Your doing a good job and hopefully you will continue soon. For all the fans of this story, please continue. I'm out!
-starfighter48

How can a story be so sad and depressing, yet, so todaly sweet, that makes you go Aw, that's so sweet, at the same time? Well, this is one story that dose just that. It's crazy I tell yea. Just crazy. I like crazy. Update soon.

Espio ready to puke on his partners...

Somehow that actually makes me giggle...