I thought for sure it would be Sam! You should write a sequel! Then they could get married.

YAY! BROOTS! I loved it. I loved it lots and lots. Broots is my favorite character, and it's pleasently refreshing to see him as the hero in a fiction. He seemed a bit out of character in one or two minor parts, but over all you have him and his parental instincts down well. Great job!

Well, there's a curving serve if ever I saw one. Broots? Broots punching someone in the face... now that does need a stretch of the mind.
Nicely done! *applauds*
Yay Brootsie!
MKP

Go Broots! Go! I thought it was him once I saw the part about him stuttering. Very good. I loved it. I think you should do a sequal to it. That would be so cool.

Hey RRP! Great to see you back on the pretender lists. Great story by the way. Our favorite computer geek is really getting brave! Hope to see more from you (if possible). :-)

Where to start? How does one express the wonderfulness of such an excellent story?
This was great, you kept me guessing as to the identity of the man all the way through. And the identity you chose made it all the better.
Can't wait for more of your stories.

Yikes! That totally shocked me! What a great job of concealing the character until the end! Marvelous work!

Oh! Aw... Thats Sweet..

Aw, this was really sweet. I'm so glad Broots was there. I was trying to think who it would be. I thought Jarod would be to obvious so I crossed him out. I was thinking Sam, because I know how much you love him. Broots is very cool as well. Good story. THanks for a good read.

wow. That was so good ! You had me guessing who it was the whole time. It wasn't until you said "maybe i'm getting braver" that i figured out it was broots. Good Job! Sky