SilverShiningStar 2007-09-30 . chapter 5Hey! I've read the last story you wrote as well, and I thought it was rather good =D.
Please continue this story! It's been forever since you've lasted updated it,and I really can't wait to see more ^_^ |
Hikari Kaiya 2005-04-12 . chapter 5Hello! It's me Tigerlily-2250! I changed my pen name. Yay! You finally updated. Sorry about not being able to help you with your idea for this story. I was being attacked by an evil army of plot bunnies and none of those bunnies had an idea that I could give you. (mutters)Stupid evil army of plot bunnies that no one needs! Well hopefully you got all of your ideas in place and will be updating this soon! |
Laur4 2004-08-20 . chapter 5Wow it's been awhile since you've updated this story...why must you make me...em..us *eyes sister* wait so long! AH! Yeah anyways...I'm enjoying these...I hope you come around again and update! |
Anonymous-cat 2004-04-20 . chapter 5Good one! liked the way she thought Ax was Visser 3, and her cool bladed morph. why didn't kaoru know who elfangor was? wouldn't the other animorphs have explained? Anyway, keeping updating. |
Gilluin 2004-04-19 . chapter 4 even tho this chapter was mostly talk, i still enjoyed it. is ryo-mew-ki one of your creations or is she from some other fanfic category?
well, i can't wait to meet her! *holds up fireball behind her back and grins*
-Gil
PS: can u email me sometime? it's innocent_baby2008@yahoo.com or tyger_star2008@yahoo.com. ^_^ |
ta-dao 2004-04-19 . chapter 4 too lazy to sign in, but eh, ur chaps are gettin choppy. wat i mean is dat ur desciptive dialogue lack the flow ur other stories have. the last two chaps were like dialogue and bam bam bam, dialogue bam bam bam. and so on. no character desciption. not much action (i dont mean fightin but like movin around, subtle little things) basically u told us wat they were doin instead of showin us through their actions. |
Tigerlily-2250 2004-04-18 . chapter 4 I liked it though the chapters could be a lot LONGER! Well please update soon! |
Anonymous-cat 2004-04-18 . chapter 4If the Perinduros are helping the Andalites, that msut be why Ryo-Mew-Ki is trying to get the box out of human hands. She doesn't realize they are working for the Andalites, or at least against the yeerks. I liked the way Ax described Perinduros, the way they copy everything. Their slang-name could be Copy-cats. Good job, and update soon. |
Illuminatus 2004-04-17 . chapter 3Whoa whoa whoa! the alien is coming in the FIFTH TO EIGHTH CHAPTER??
isn't that taking things just a LITTLE bit slow?
why must you do this to me?
oh come on! i can feel a pout coming on. . .
anyways, great chapter again, really looking forward to next one!
~namarie~
-Gil |
John Masaki 2004-04-15 . chapter 3 Hi! *waves*
Now they found out that a cabbit's on the loose, I can't wait for the next chapter! *Much wishes this was a true crossover, but, feh, matters not.* |
Gilluin 2004-04-15 . chapter 3 Hi, another great chappie.
omg, it's GONE??!!
Ryo-Mew-Ki, isn't it?
i don't quite get who she is, tho.
but what ev.
luv this,
-Gil |
Anonymous-cat 2004-04-14 . chapter 3Nice update, and a good way to bring Ryo-Mew-Ki into the story. Wonder how she disapeared so fast? I like the way you use differeent words in the diary part, like Verdaifei, and gaie. Verdaifei is a measure of time, right? Good job, and continue! |
Tigerlily-2250 2004-04-14 . chapter 3 YAY! Their first sight of Ryo-Mew-Ki. I guess that she is staying at Takehiro's and Kaoru's house. I hope they don't put it in their basement. Well good luck in you stories! And don't wait too long! |
Gilluin 2004-04-12 . chapter 2 sry for not reviewing in such a long time. spring break is over now, so school is taking up a lotta time.
this chapter was still good as always, tho painfully lacking in action. *ow*
o c'mon! i wanna meet your alien already!
thanx for the answers 2 my ?'s.
keep this up!
-Gil |
The Fair Lady Psyche 2004-04-10 . chapter 2This is very good so far, but I have one question about Kaoru, Takehiro, and Ryo-Mew-Ki's origin. It seems to me that you based them, the Karine ablilities, and the Jauri slighty off the Tenchi Muyo series. Am I right? But even so, this is a good story that I will certainly add to my favorites, and continue reading. |