Ok now I want to cry, why do you deny ryouga happiness. granted this gives him a reason to return to ranma and akane, but to do it the guys whos life has alwys been crappy, that sucks. you made me cry when I found out shed been taken from him. Its not fair!

A little more disjointed than the first, and the confusion scenes were in character to the series. Well done.

You Deserve the 'AW' Award...lol...I'd so LOVE to see Ramna getting all jealous with Ryouga spending so much time with 'his wife'...love that possessiveness he has in him

interesting story so far, I like it

beautiful story...

*GASP*

It's like, still incomplete! Now I have to read another story too, eh? Heehee. That's okay. I probably will. I wasn't going to read it, but... kids! Gah! I love kids. I love cats too. But kids...

Poor, poor Ryouga. I feel soo bad for him. And what about poor Ukyou? I think I nearly cried at one point in this chapter.

Great story, and I'm sorry to see it end. The story, I mean. I might try to read the sequal later this week, but who knows? I have a six-day workweek this week. Ugh.

Cheers!
-KK

You left me no choice but to review early. I was going to read ALL the way through before I reviewed, but I read your author note.

And I agree with you. I do the same thing when I write. Even about thoughts of characters, feelings, emotions, etc. Very good thought there! I've been thinking it for years, and I'm glad I'm not the only one.

You should see a factory. It's really all the men that talk like that- not the women. But that's only because men are just naturally more perverse than women. :D Amara sounds just like ninety-percent of my coworkers.

Anyway, sorry for my lame review. I had a lot to say, and immediately forgot what it was when I read your author notes. Ugh. I suck.

Will review at the end, also!

When I read A matter of choice and found out that there was a continuation, i had to read this. I like the story but the ending was kinda like a cliffhanger to me. I hope there will be a continuation. =) Can't wait to read it. Keep up the good work.

FINALLY!

Well it took long enough and IMHO it would have taken this long in the canon storyline.

Great job KK!

dennisud

Oh, this is so wonderful it is hard to put in words! This is the best Ranma/Akane fic I have ever read. (I wish Ryoga could have had just a bit more luck, though. :( )You ended this story beautifully and I can't wait to read more of your work! KEEP WRITING!

Lovely story, and I must say that I absolutely adored the James Joyce reference. "The Dead" is probably my all-time favorite short story. Keep up the wonderful stories!

Well, I do feel happy knowing Mousse and Shampoo sorted themselves out, but I can’t help but feel bad for Kasumi.

WOW i just started reading this and i was like WOAH!! this is some pretty nice things. Im not able to finish all this because of homework but i am looking forward to reading the rest of this.

LATER WOOT WOOT ;)

oh, this is such a really good story. please update as soon as you can!

Wow, awesome story,it was so sweet and it flowed really well! I do not usually read M rated fics, but you kept yours pretty well clean...very respectable, anywayz, great story, and I hope you keep it up.

Poor Ryoga...and wow to Ranma and Akane having ~3~ kids! Great job with everyones attitude!!

I cannot wait to read anputher one by you (even tho I have)

Bai Bai!

~Kohana