Good start - what happened? Will you finish this? Please

hi hi! i read this a while back, but FF.net was being poopy so i wasn;t able to review with any degree of certainty that you would get it so yeah! HERE I AM NOW!
GREAT CHAPTER! YOU NUMBER ONE! ^_^ nahh! it was a good chapter, i liked it, and what lyrics was that? i can;t remember it, and niice! hint hint! have something evil happen soon! that will make people go.."WTF!?" amnd cry out for more, with one voice,...as if a thousand voices screamed out in angry and annoyance with you cliff hanger! cliffys are good. asures people waiting on your next chapter! OW OW OW! damn it! my leg hurts way to much for this crap right now! annyway! again! good chapter and character developemtn! where did my pants go huh!?!?! CAN YOU TELL ME ThAT?!

Hm,...that's our Bones! Noticing those little 'human' things about the crew members. The fact that Uhura hasn't been singing lately would be like Spock not playing chess! So of course it would seem obvious that there is something wrong when she hasn't been singing! And now she's become obsessed with her work, specifically this system's modifications stuff! And is this connected to her song? Undoubtedly so, but how and why is the question.
And now, an unidenitfied ship has been tracing them? Perhaps Kirk is eager for a squirmish, but what about poor Uhura and how quickly she becomes ignored? And do these new visitors have something do with her system modifications and song? I know I know,...so many questions but I can't help it! And of course that's a great thing about stories like this1 When you keep wondering what is going to happen next is half the fun in reading a story and also says what a great story it is! So hurry witht he next chapter..pluuz...

excellent beginning! now, where's the next chapter? please?

whoah! Spoke notecing something! AS IF! anywaay, GOOD WORK! hai hai! was very good...I SMELL A SLASH FIC! hello spock and bones! ..acctually i am going to bet you get heaps of those...anyway, again, nice chapter, i want to read more though, meaning i'm not sure whats going on, so i would like to know! i KNOW! i coule BETA it for you! YEAH! something...lets just leave it at nice chapter and i will go to sleep...

yea, don't worry about that disclaimer thingie. I had to upload my first story three times before I had it all right! ;)
I love the bit about McCoy thinking that Kirk would look at this as a boring encounter instead of something he could really throw himself into and have his shirt ripped and muss his hair. Sounds right from McCoys sid and Kirk's thinking.
And I'm intrigued about the little lizard creature with the tattoo. Someone is going to give it a name right? I mean, it needs a name like Fluffy or Furball, :D And let me guess the creature latches on to Uhura. Or is it Spock? Wouldn't surprise me if the little guy like the Vulcan better than most. Critters tend to be that way. And who is going to brave enough to get close to the critter to find out what that tattoo is really all about? Or does McCoy cut out the middle man and slip it a mickey fin?
And what is about Uhura that Spock seems to think there is a problem? Hm...So many more questions! Which means,..hurry with the next chapter please! :D

Hey, I love finding stories that don't always have the main characters being the *big three* all the time! Although McCoy and Kirk will always be my favorites, it great to see a story focusing on one someone else too! i mean it's not like those three did everything all by themselves, ya know!
And I'm really interested in this 'Song' of Uhura's that she has eighter lost or doesn't realize she's lost or was lost and she's the one who found it...well you get my meaning, I hope. :)
And I love the bit about Kirk saying, 'They thinkt that I'm sayng they're ungly?", because the man would probably be sitting there thinking either aliens were idiots or something, because we all know that he certainly would be fluent in whatever he tried...;)
It's just nice to find a story dealing with another of the characters this morning. Refreshing is a word that some would say, and it is. And I have a feeling more will be coming, so please hurry. :D

OMG! This is great so far. I can't wait till you update it. Keep up the good work and please update soon.!

hey! i can honstly say that this is the best star treck fic i have ever read! really! it;s true!
great! i will hope to make this review different from the 100's of otheres i am sure you will be getting in due cause!
good first chapter, little angsty, but whats not these days? anyway, so far i am liking it, cept for the german,...^_^
write more, and once you get a plot i will write more reviews. see ya!