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Phoenix Moon 13 2004-04-08 . chapter 1
Oh God, that was beautiful. I loved how you wrote the lesser Scoobies first, like Spike and Tara. It made the ending so much more powerful. I was all teary, but then the words on his gravestone really got me. This was brilliant!
Only one thing I'd like to point out, if it was a sunnyday, how could Spike be there? But maybe I missed something.
But that's one minor point, overall though, I thought this was beautifully poignant. Bravo! :)
JWolf 2004-04-07 . chapter 1
oh my, I do belive that you've topped yourself here. very nice...er angsty?!?;') ending here. pretty much liked everyones reactions here, and while I realize that you feel you've laid this fic to rest, I dn'na know an look at the group, and esspecially Dawnie & Buffy here, an year later to see how they're holding up would be nice. even if htat doesn't happen, I really enjoyed this fic, very good work.
SlayerBiz-nitch 2004-04-07 . chapter 1
Your story is really good. I think Joss might have made a mistake not ending Season 5 your way. :)
RobClark 2004-04-07 . chapter 1
Sad, but very well done.
Rob
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