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tsuvi
2005-12-28 . chapter 1
Heylo, it's tsuvi from GnH. I just dropped by to read some of your stories and may I say, this is a very cool fic.

I read in your authors notes that you apologise for the confusing structure, but before I read that I thought you purposely didn't make it an obvious fact that it was from Draco's POV, so it gave the story a twist. I feel it only added to the story and it made me shiver when you find out it was Harry going to the dark side, because evil!harry is a rare occurrence, but one I like ;)

This fic is a nice balance of angst and drama. It's not too angsty (like all those ones where you feel utterly destroyed) this is thrilling, but not too disturbing.

I really enjoy your style, keep writing :)

tsuvi
Aerama
2005-10-10 . chapter 1
*waves from FA*
Wow. Just, wow. What remarkable insight you had here. I have to say that at the beginning I did think it had to be Harry as the narrator - with the whole subplot (or superplot) of betrayal. Then a couple things didn't fit that theory, though all I did was try to make them fit the theory! What a superb story. I really enjoyed it, which I feel funny saying because it was, after all, a somber tragedy, but it was so well-written, I couldn't help myself!
sim
2005-08-16 . chapter 1
hey...woah...nice one-shot...as sum1 has just informed me they're called. i loved it. altho i thought harry woz first person thruout it until the end, then had to re-read. but it woz great...luv the structure, very suspensful n dramatic. look forward to more writing from u.
VaniaHepskins
2004-05-01 . chapter 1
Hi! I do´nt read Harry/Draco slash, i don´t know anything about HP, jejeje.. i can not to read his books, i was trying so far!! :'(
i´m just leaving this review, so, excuse me please... you´re so GOOD writer, so... i´m thinking... ¬.¬ What about your another fic? :'( i´m going to cry! please! Update soon!
Kisses! ^_^
Fearuin
2004-04-29 . chapter 1
That's really not what I expected. I expected it to be way worse- well done, dude! A huge LOL to the *BANG* 'fuck off' at the bottom- only you and I understand that joke. And the 'I'm your father' joke, though I'm glad you didn't put that one in.
Anyway, you're such a bad liar, you always say you're not a good writer. This story only proves me right. SO THERE. And you're a great BETA, too, looking over TF for me. If anyone is reading this review right now and needs a BETA for their slashfics, go to vkay's account and email her.
Yes, I AM advertising you. Too bad :P
r.mai
2004-04-08 . chapter 1
is this a one shot? hopefully not? i'd like to know why harry did what he did... it was very interesting! at first glance, one would assume that it would be DRACO doing the betraying and not Harry... welps, cya! it was a wonderful story to read albeit angsty!
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