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najara
2007-01-11
ch 3,
abuseI'm not surprised that you got so many good reviews!
This is really a great story!
And... the most important thing.. it's pretty much realistic..
What I mean is - I truly can see that what you write could be real - it fits to B.
I dare to say - you know B. pretty good!
canadianfan1984
2004-09-10
ch 11,
abuseThe story's over? I can't believe it! I thought it was a great Bug fic and I can't wait to read more of your future stories!
Sweet-rush37
2004-09-10
ch 1,
abuseI just have to say, I really enjoyed your story and hope you continue soon with a new one. thanks

Love,Jenna
canadianfan1984
2004-09-03
ch 10,
abuseFinally Bug has an edge over Woody!! And he calls himself a detective, pfft. Great Work!!
canadianfan1984
2004-08-27
ch 9,
abuseThis is SUCH a great chapter!
canadianfan1984
2004-07-31
ch 8,
abuseAww.. I like it when Bug and Nigel work together, please continue.
canadianfan1984
2004-07-28
ch 7,
abuseI can't wait to find out who S is!! This is excellent, please continue.
canadianfan1984
2004-07-01
ch 6,
abuseGreat chapter!
not-falling
2004-06-29
ch 5,
abusecontinue soon =)...

~Brie
canadianfan1984
2004-06-29
ch 5,
abuseWOW what a GREAT twist!! I can't wait to read more!
canadianfan1984
2004-06-15
ch 4,
abuseGreat story so far!! I can't wait to read more!!
Upside-Up
2004-04-29
ch 4,
abuseNow, before I start, don't get me wrong. I do enjoy a good Bug-centric story, but please please PLEASE have someone edit your work! The tenses are all screwed up and you're confused by words that can be spelled with or without contractions. Just because the spell checker says its a word doesn't mean it's the right one. "Whose" should be "Who's" in this last chapter. I like where I think this story is goig, but I can't read it with all the spelling and grammar mistakes! Keep going, but get a beta!
missiemeghan
2004-04-26
ch 3,
abuseI'm Really liking this story!
csi gsr freak
2004-04-17
ch 3,
abuseI LOVE THIS STORY!! It really rocks and I didn't think anyone cared that much about Bug to actually write this and then you did and you are a genious thank you thank you thank you! You seriously rock, please write more. Thank you so much.
Auron is my man
2004-04-17
ch 3,
abuseI loved this it's great. But poor Bug.
-Nikki
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