Medilia 2007-07-12 . chapter 1GREAT story.
bad elflings *starts chasing them with wooden spoon* no one hurts my Estel! |
Deanna 2007-06-21 . chapter 1 Oh ouch... mutilating your ears. That's quite painful. Poor little Estel :(
XD The part about Glorfindel using big words to annoy the twins reminds me of me. |
Dis Thrainsdotter 2006-08-07 . chapter 1Poor Estel, he does all he can in order to blend in among the others. I have a feeling that if Elrond find those whose words were overheard by Estel he will give them a lecture and The Eyebrow. |
x-Rose-Tyler-x 2005-10-25 . chapter 1Aww, poor Estel! This is really good, you're great at portraying Aragorn's sadness and all that. |
Depprium 2005-09-19 . chapter 1Um... why would Estel cut his own ears? It wasn't the ears that made the elf, it was the eyes that defined whether a person was an Elf or a Man.
And why would the elven children tease Estel about being human, when their own lord also had human blood? Elrond, Elladan and Elrohir were all Half-elven. |
Samwise of the Celeb-Gur 2005-05-29 . chapter 1Awesome! But you have to pity Estel, i never imagined that Elves would stoop to such as bullying, but I suppose Elven children are as uncontrollable as ours. Would a child like him have really thought about using a blade to change who he was born into someone else? Just a thought.
absolutely incredible and imaginative as always.
Arianwen |
Rhys 2004-11-06 . chapter 1Aw, poor little kid! It always seems like growing up in Imladris would be wonderful, but I suppose elven children can be as mean as human ones, and being the only human surrounded by these almost supernatural beings would be difficult. Especially with how some elves simply scorn humans anyway, and if they're young they'd likely have less restrain and tact. Thank goodness for Elrond and the Twins. Poor Estel; he should have used scar wax and liquid latex to make himself pointy ears. It's far less painful, trust me--although if your hair gets stuck in it, it can be a real trip to pull them off. Ahem, anyway! Really great job capturing little Estel's hurt, and his ada's reaction was good. The idea of the child actually trying to cut his ears into shape is both terrifying and yet completely understandable. You also managed to not make it too dark--he is, after all, just a child--while still getting across a hint of the horror his father and brothers must have felt at the sight. Nice job! |
CatClawz 2004-08-30 . chapter 1 I loved this! I even got to learn some Elvish. :D
I really loved the feel of the whole piece, it fit together very well. I would love it if you could write stories of Estel's time in Rivendell, but that's up to you. |
anticipationnation 2004-07-03 . chapter 1Oh so i took time out from writing to do a lil reading and found this little gem... this is a really great piece and i love how you write!! |
The Bonnie Pirate Lass 2004-06-05 . chapter 1I like this... it's so cute... it's honesty, and it touches base on alot of things that little kids go through in real life and wraps them into something they can understand, I was tormented terribly in grade school, and know that feeling of heartbreak well... I don't, however, know if Estel is a Tolkien character, or one of yours? I haven't read all of the books yet, but am working on it. :)
Always,
Heaven Marquin, The Bonnie Pirate Lass |
Tabii 2004-06-03 . chapter 1COOL! creppy, but COOL! |
Lutris 2004-04-29 . chapter 1I loved this vignette! Though I don't remember having seen your email, I was wandering around (though I should be studying):P and found it. It's great! I personally adore vignettes :) |
Ithildiel 2004-04-24 . chapter 1Aw! Poor little Estel! That's really sweet... I'm all teary now! So I can't see the screen enough to do my physics homework... shame. Takes real skill to make me cry...
Agorech mae!
~*ITHILDIEL*~ |
wolfbrother 2004-04-22 . chapter 1I liked this. A good soid ficlet. nothing I could really find wrong with it. Also, a (sort of) happy ending, and apparently no scarring at al (although I wasn't looking for it in the film- maybe that's why "Strider" wore a hood a lot). BTW, I shoudl be back at college soon- I'll say hi when I'm back. |
DreaminofLorien 2004-04-18 . chapter 1OH! *Holds Estel*.. Poor Baby *glares evily at elflings* Just you wait... |