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| The Miss Marauders 2006-03-14 ch 1,  | abuseHehe! Cute! x C x |
| Captain Oz 2006-03-09 ch 1, | abuseHmm, now what could they do next... heeheehee... |
| TheDeathChamber 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abuseAdorable! |
| Philomela Kellswater 2004-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI liked this story so much that I was actually talking loud to myself when I had finished reading it. I said something about 'Naw, it's so cute!' or something like that. And it is, this story is very cute, and I liked it very much! :D |
| A Sirius Fan 2004-09-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI enjoyed this. I don't understand your critics. Since when is a fully clothed teen giving another fully clothed teen a very few kisses on the nose and neck **? Hello, 21st century calling. Anyway, I think it had just the right touches of romance and humor. I would have liked it when I was 13...back in the day. |
| safire flame 2004-07-20 ch 1, | abusefuh-luffy! |
| Prologi 2004-05-26 ch 1, | abuseAww. ^^ I've read more blatantly slashy stories since I was twelve. Oh, did I destroy my virginal beliefs early. x) |
| atemyamiyugisetolover 2004-05-03 ch 1, | abuseupdate |
| Fantome 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, this is too adorable. I love it! I can definitely imagine the Flamels with cookies and lemonade since they're Dumbledore's friends. "All the better to see you with." Oh, now, that is CLASSIC! Ten points! Great job! You are the QUEEN of R/S. |
| AddictedToEwan 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abuseSo cute! Remus and Sirius are just adorable together, aren't they? I loved the Stone being in the begonias, too. Wonderful place to keep it. :) Wonderful fluffy story, I |
| JKLB 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseIn the begonias--of course. Where else would one keep the one and only Philosopher's Stone? I can just see James having such an illustrious neighbor and being completely nonchalant about it. I was also happy to see Sirius "rewarded" for going away for a little while like an obedient puppy. |
| LBx 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abuseCan I say I love it? And I don't think the rating is too low, I mean, if there was swearing and stuff . . . but the kiddies are reading worse, I'm sure. Anywho! My friend just got me hooked into HP fics today, and I have to agree, Remus/Sirius is adorable. Lovely drabble you have here, and best of luck on your future fics! |
| Evilgrinch 2004-04-07 ch 1, | abuseOh God oh god oh god! There is nothing wrong with the story, the story is fine...well written, albeit concise. But the CENSORSHIP RATING my dear girl is far too low. PARENTAL GUIDANCE?!!??!? PG?!!??! Don't you mean R? For a start, I resent things being PG as it implies that the reader will read it with their parents help and guidance (which I find extremely unlikely in this case). Secondly, there are scenes bordering on the pornographic here between Padfoot and Lupin. I daren't even think how a second chapter would begin, but I suspect that it would involve horrific scenes that would corrupt my mind. You're a good writer though, with an extremely good understanding of the relevent characters in this piece. |
| Kyrissaean 2004-04-07 ch 1, | abuse*smiles* |
| Remus Is Mine 2004-04-07 ch 1, | abuseAw! Remus and Sirius mush! I LOVE Remus and Sirius mush! Go Remmie/Siri! LOVE them,... my fav characters... and fav slash characters.. lol... great fic! |