I liked this story a lot. I think it's very well written.

Oh. You fleshed this idea out nicely. The characters here are much more...human than they appear elsewhere. Human weaknesses and human doubts. Very excellent reading. Thanks.

hi there, just wanted to say how much i liked your story. It was very good, and i really enjoyed reading it. sort of a neat idea Theoden and Thorngil knowing each other. Nice to see Theoden as he was when younger.

You've obviously done your homework on the dates and times. Very believable. And I am glad you avoided the slash.