That was cruel! (but funny):D

LOVED the story, bad ending though they should have TOTALLY got together! It was great though, you should do a sequal! X

Well it wasn't terrible. But...the ending made it a little more on the tragedy side.

ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER! You are leaving me and hopefully others too in a cliffhanger!

...o.O ..knuckles and shadow barely even talk to eachother...why are you pairing them up...thats just... wierd... no offense and all...but i don`t see that ever happening..and this story was pretty good, but next time put a ..tinny winny feeling in it ..a good author can think of something even if he or she doesn`t like what he`s writing down writing. that the art or ceativity :D
and..i kind of hate it when people put two characters that aren`t even gay together...imagine what they`d feel if they knew
that people where writing stuff lke that or how would you feel if some wrote a love fic about you and (insert name here of somebody you barely know or that you are just friends with here) ...well thats my opion ...


:D ... ELLA... :D

Make a sequel!

Hello, remember me? I USED to review as DarkXeno. The past two chapters had alot of angst, especially compared to the previous ones. I don't think you should have ended it so abrubtly, but what you wrote is probably what would have happened if Sega decided to do something like this. Anyway, since I read and reviewed your story, I wouldn't mind if you would take a look at mine. I'm not sure if you're familiar with the movie "SAW", but I've been working on a fic entitled "JigSonic". Feel free to read if you wish.

I absolutely loved your story!! Though the ending is a bit abrupt, even for an open ending, the story itself and how you potrayed the Knux/Rouge relationship was great.

First off, i like to say that your ending wasn't at all that bad, I actualy liked it, alot. It's not like those other fanfics where the ending involves a cute and love happy ending, no this one is in fact better. It stays true the characters, plus the ending left a undetermined relationship between two stubborn characters and I like a question mark ending, it leave a mystery unsolved. You should be proud with what you have done. There isn't that many fanfics that I've read with a nonromantic ending and thats the reason why this one is so good.

I also like to say that the humor portion of the story was in fact funny. Grammer and spelling seems to be all alright and you even used words that I probably wouldn't have thought to use sinces I'm so bad in english. Overall a very polished job.

Note: I am one those people who oppose love relationships between any sonic character. There is nothing wrong with the pairing thing, I just don't find the need for love in the series.

-Jze0-

Very nicely written. I felt moved by this story. I nod with admiration.

sorry, i forgot to give you my e-mail. if you want to tell me where you got your knuckles plushie, my e-mail is lalaland872002@
thx lots,
knuxgirl

sorry that you felt akward writing a knux-rouge. i like the pairing and i feel that even though you think it sucked, it was pretty good. good job. also i want to know where you got a knuckles plushie. i would give my soul for a knux plushie(j/k)but i have been looking everywhere! where! i want one. and again, good job on the fic.

This is a very good story. It's a shame it's so short, although I may just be used to long stories. This more of average length, so I can't say it's horribly short, just felt like it could be explored and lengthened with more relationship development. I'm also curious as to know why you hate the Knuckles/Rouge pairing, especially since it's one of the more popular pairings out there. If you do feel like responding, my e-mail is KStar0715@

Though i hate knux/rouge pairings I really enjoyed this story. Though the ending felt a bit...incomplete it is a very good story. Sad incomplete endings rule!...Well i think so :)

This is a good Knuckles\Rouge story, but i feel that it needs some kind of sequel, rather than a better ending.