Aww.,. so sad and sweet.,. I'll have to say that the game hints otherwise, but this was very creative, in the least. Very beautifully written!

Aw, so beautiful, so sad! ;_;

...This is so sad. It's one of the best Tragedies I've ever read.

Where did that Limstella idea come from?
I´ts a VERY good story, I think (From me,a Limstella fan)

Hey, great job. I really enjoyed reading this. You put so much detail and attention into each scene and every character; the description is fluid and pretty, but still concise and meaningful.
I could stand to learn a thing or two from you. ^_^

Wow! This is REALLY GOOD! It's so well writin and I just love anything that has to do with morphs.
But if you like stories that have a big morph plot to it, then you should check out mine!
Fire Emblem Chronicles: Red Warrior, Black Rose.
The only thing really bad thing about this fic is that IT'S A DAMN ONE SHOT! I wish you'd go on!
~The Story Master 125~

Quite good. I also have wondered if they were family.

Wow...that was just so beautiful... I love how you've portrayed Limstella and Ephidel. And...stuff... I'm truly speechless at this, and have no idea how to put my thoughts on this into words. Just so beautiful...

Another lovely one-shot from you! Yay! There's nothing to point out as a mistake! Excellent work and nice "side-plot" as to see how Ephidel and Limstella became morphs. I'm pretty sure they are related and yes, I already knew Nergal created them... But this actually makes a good theory not to mention an alternate story which makes sense! Excellent work as usual! And you will make a tremendous breakthrough on fanfiction.net if you keep writing like this! So don't mind me if I add another piece of your work on my Favorite stories list because, really and believe me, this is another excellent piece!

nice. i like how you portrayed the morphs before became..morphs. we know nergal created his morphs, but i like your version too :)

Wow, that was great. And don't worry, ur not the only one who thinks they're related.
elvengirl10

Another great one-shot from you! Very interesting background story. I never would have thought of Limstella and Ephidel actually being normal people before Nergal took over. I like your way of thinking! Keep Writing!