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Moonyk 2006-03-03 . chapter 18
AH Great great fic. Took me 2 days to read it and its like 2am now. hehe. What does “Vous et nul alter" mean?

Wow you really stretched out their relationship and for that I am grateful. YAY!

cheers!
Kerichi 2004-10-22 . chapter 18
Read the whole fic as present to self for being a good girl and posting another chap on my D/G fic- hint, hint, heh, heh.

Really enjoyed it. The whole complicated family-friends-secrets plot & subplot was extremely entertaining. Draco's characterization was very different than mine is in several areas, but charming, just the same and Ginny was hilarious.

Since your ficlet was a 'secret love' type and this took place a long while after Hogwarts, I hope you'll write a 'secret love' while at school fic. A beta would help catch the piddly things that don't really matter, but cheeky reviewers like to point out, but don't we all need beta readers to be beta writers? lol

Loved the ending, happy sniff about feeling a faher's love. T_T
white smoke 2004-10-02 . chapter 18
i simply loved ur story! it has such character and wonderful vocabulary. u did a great job on it... was very interesting... keep up the great work mate!
cheers
Jennifer Clarke 2004-08-29 . chapter 17
I reviewed in chaptr 18, I hope you can still read this, I can't find an email addres on your profile page but I read you were looking for a beta and I hope your still looking for one. I read a lot of fanfiction, am a nearly-straight-A in English Studies C+ course at college, thats the highest course you can do at 17 years of age in Tasmania without being one of the those freakishly smart kids that start uni at 10 (do they exist?) but I am a good english student, I know the Harry Potter stories inside out and back the front and inside out, if your even remotely interested could you drop me a line, true I haven't atcually been a beta before but I'd love to start, my email address is cutey_pie41@hotmail.com I have a high level junk mail filter so to make sure I actually notice it in my junk mail folder please write the heading in capital letter and something like "THIS IS NOT JUNK" so I don't empty it with the rest of my spam mail
I don't mean to beg, I just really excited that maybe you'd want some help with your fantastic stories... (and d/g's the ultimate hp couple)
Jennifer Clarke 2004-08-29 . chapter 18
I've never reviewed any fan story before, on any website no matter how good or bad, the comment at the bottom says
"It is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer"
Well you can't improve congratulations, you nailed the characters, you gave the ending away in the first chapter but made 18 chapters a fantastic read, you wrote an incredible story!! I'm so glad I only dicovered it today and was able to read the whole thing in one go or I'd have died waiting for the chapters to be posted one by one.
I'm not a fan of anything, but I can at least say that I lovced this, it was wonderful and so incredibly believable, you've got such a gift IF NOTHING ELSE KEEP USING IT, KEEP WRITING - i am a firm believer in fanfiction, but even so, there are writers that give the genre a terrible name... you're incredible, you've written a beautiful story and oh what i would give just for every story to be like this. please, keep writing, let it take you wherever it takes you
Kayla 2004-08-27 . chapter 18
Wow. I think that was awesome. It was one of the most angst-y stories I've read in a very long time. I was literally sitting at the edge of my seat and like hoping that it would all work out. I loved how it was nowhere near simple or easy. It made it all the more exciting. I thought it was just great.
Dracosbaby 2004-08-26 . chapter 18
OMG! The ending was so adorable!! It made me so happy! I'm crying tears of joy right now. I absolutely loved this fic! Please continue wrting D/G fics. Great job on this! Thank you for creating a wonderful fic!
bigreader 2004-08-26 . chapter 18
*gasps loudly* SHE'S PREGNANT!?! AW! what does that phrase that Draco whispered into Ginny's ear mean? *whines* I WANT TO KNOW!! UPDATE SOON!
FireRoseRed 2004-08-26 . chapter 18
Oh my goodness, that was fantastic!! I absolutely loved it ~ the ending especially. Thank you so much for sharing that story with us!
LovesFantasy 2004-08-26 . chapter 18
It's so full of happy fluffy goodness!! I enjoyed it greatly!! If only some man would sweep me off my feet like that. . . *swoons*

With all the crap those two went through to get to this point they deserved a cottony soft, fluffy end. *cheers*
LovesFantasy 2004-05-28 . chapter 17
Oh, got a little tear in the corner of my eye. Great chapter. Had to do a bit of rereading before hand, I've been reading so many of these. I'm truly addicted. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more!
Wizzabee 2004-05-28 . chapter 17
that is so cute!
crazyfire89 2004-05-27 . chapter 17
WOW! i noticed how yu stuck in the out side of hte diary, and i thank you! the only thing i would say is: get soem more plot goign, you seem as if the story is loosing a little steam, dont forget that twists and spontaneous turns are what makes stories interesting. otherwise i loved it. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
crazyfire89 2004-05-07 . chapter 16
so i must say that i loved the chapter, i was a little disopointed at the length and lack of plot but i still loved it. keep going! i cant wait to see what happens next. and i must add that i happen to favor the non-journal writing myself. so if you would be so kind as to add some more non-journal into one of my FAVORITE fics, that bravo to you! so please PLEASE UPDATE SOON, before i have i heart a ttack formt he suspence!
bigreader 2004-05-06 . chapter 16
UPDATE SOON! does he love here why can't he just say he loves her? WHY WHY?!?!?!~
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