Well-written, totally kinky, hilarious, and, for the most part, in character. _ Must I say I loved it?

Oh my god that was so funny! You definately must do more!

lol! That was pretty funny.o

Is there a sequel to this? I hope so! -

YESYESYESYES! I'm so glad you posted this! I absolutely loved it. Characterization...everything was dead on! Honestly, this is the best Naruto fanfic I have read yet (and oh boy have I been searching for some good ones...)! Keep up the good work. I'm going to go check out your other stuff.

OMG!XD That was evil of Kakashi but very very funny! I wonder how he'd react if there was an animated version of Icha Icha Paradise XD

*rotfs* Oh...my...god... AMAZING! I love it! XD Poor Jiraiya being uninspired. I'm so glad Kakashi is loyal enough to the series to help his favorite author out a bit, even out of his own pocket! ;) Excellent work! Followup? :)
Anatra

oh now, this is very interesting...

hahahaha i like it...i knew naruto was using that jutsu the whole time! _ i just didnt know it was sasuke too...i actually thought the other girl was kakashi but...i forgot that sasuke has black hair not kakashi...hahaha the ending is so funny...not much of a sasunaru fan but i like some of them hehe funny funny!

Well, I'm sorry to say that I didn't read soe of te more graphic parts cause I'm not into yuri, but I have to comend you on this fic anyway. It was so funny to think of Kakashi and Naruto giggling uncontrolably. Made me giggle too. LOL

Funny, funny , funny, funny.
Well written and cute.
cdk

That was ... interesting. I'm not sure what to think. One minute i'm feeling aroused, the next i'm feeling amusement. Its still enjoyable to read though.

Oh. This was very naughty and delicious. *sigh* I hope there are more works like this from u in the future .